Darkness; it can rest within any person, any motive, and any world. Darkness can be as simple as your own imagination that scares you, or as complex as the evil that stirs in one's heart. Because of one molevolent, forgotton darkness, a certain era of prolonged peace that has lasted for countless eons may be in grave danger. However, where there is darkess, exists light; the familiar light of couragous intentions, the duty to protect those around you, the ultimate way to vanquish the darkness. Sometimes the light might fade, rarely, it may even snuff out. But even the weakest light is a beacon of hope. The interesting thing about light...about hope, is that it can come from the most unexpected places...to drive out the darkness...
*sigh...a HiE self insert WITH a friend. Yes, originality isn't my strong suit, but I thought it would be rather fun to whip up a decent adventure tale. For those willing to take a look, Daniel and I hope you enjoy!
Rated Teen for:
-Adult humor
-Language
-Violence
-My Little Pony: Friendhip is Magic-The Hub/Hasbro
-Resident Evil 6/Resident Evil franchise-Capcom
Very nice
I'd love to see this story progress
I'm watching you.... Literally!
good job kj
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Thank you guys so much for the feedback
And I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
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awesome dude!
"Rarity whi-I mean...complained.
Give MOAR
Brilliant!
Yeah, MOAR!!
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Well played, good sir
, well played
Are you going on a vacation?
keep up the good work when you get back
Love the story so far,
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yeah...im heading down to see my dad for a while.
and thanks again for your support...im really glad someones enjoying the story!
Have a great summer everyone!!!
romance tab: yes
Yes for the romance, and this story is coming along well I can't wait for more.
So writing Romance is a Comedy? Romantic comedy. HA!
"We have an obligation for her"
"with an obligation"
I'm pretty sure it should be "a proposition " in both cases.
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YES! I was trying to think of that exact word while writing that part, but for some reason it wouldn't come to me at the time.
It's fixed, and Thank You!
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I'm happy to help.
lololololololol
YES
FIRST!! and goddamn cliffhangers!!!
Dude, you really need a pre-reader.
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Yeah, Daniel was saying that too...I think from now on, I'll pre-read chapters before I publish them.
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Yeah, I'm definitely seeing fewer errors now.
and there you went cliché. i mean seriously, what is with every HiE and turning the humans into ponies? oh well.......good chapter, looking forward to the next.
Ugh you just had to make them into ponies?... This sucks...
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The only reason I had them turn was because of the side effects of using the shard, but don't worry, I don't plan to keep them that way for the rest of the story.
1355126 I will stay... for now...
1355722 You don't have to read it if it really bothers you that much...Honestly...I was not expecting this much backlash...I'm all for criticism but...damn...
THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! WHY??!?!?
1355927Honestly, I don't see why there is a problem with humans being turned into ponies. I mean come on, wouldn't you want to be one as well? Besides that, good chapter, can't wait for the next one
1356788 Thank you, friend. I'm sorry if it is cliche, but Daniel and I agreed that this twist would focus on a certain plot point.
Again, thanks.
1357577 I don't mean any offense but I seam to think that too many HIEs are making the humans into ponies... meh I don't care.
1357906 Well, I don't want anyone who's enjoyed my story to be dissapointed. Hell, I wasn't even aware that it was cliche. (Of the decent number of HiE stories I've read, I haven't seen that happen alot) But like I said, they won't be like that for too long, it was only by chance of using the shard that this happened to them.
1359718 mmmk
i like dogs.....and cats.....
Haha, nice. I bet alot of people are gonna be mad for having a filler like this, but this was pretty funny.
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it's just that the writer's block has come down pretty heavy...so I thought if I made an unrelated chapter, it might help with that.
Writing about what actually happened when Daniel and I got RE:6 in turn really did help, and I'm glad you liked it.
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HA! You should keep up with small filler chapters where they continue to play games, with two chapters per game, and you space them all out.
APPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1447407 That doesn't sound too bad, although they would be every few chapters or so. So you would like me to do another one with RE 6?
Yeah you have Luna play and beat it and she laughs at everyone who looks at her in awe that she played so well.
NOOOOOOO!
I hate it when writers
Have a perfectly good HIE then they make the human a pony that's what I hate
1472858 thats when everything gets silly
Why did you re-post it? Good chapter, by the way; and I don't mind people being turned into ponies, as long as it's well done.
1550679 There are two possibilities as to why I re-posted it. One would be last night when the website was screwing with me. I went to hit the publish button, and it wouldn't do anything. I waited for a while, and tried clicking it again, but right before I clicked, I kid you not, it switched to "unpublish."
So when I hit publish for the second time, it worked, and I left it at that.
Then this morning, I checked the site, and noticed that there was no feedback yet. (Although, it was probably because it was fairly early in the morning.) Anyway, I checked the story updates, and didn't see mine from last night. I figured maybe it was because the site was acting up when I tried to publish it. Eventually, I tried one last time to publish it, which I thought was risky since the moderators don't like people to do that, but I did it to make sure it WAS updated for sure. All in all...a fun experience.
i eat dogs
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no you don't, Daniel...you OWN a dog