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Damocles23


I write what makes me happy. Hope it makes you happy as well!

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Lol. I love their dialogue together. So dirty, yet adorable.

D'aww, this was fun.

“And I stopped complaining instantly.”
:rainbowlaugh:

It's an interesting experiment but I feel like it takes away from the experience somewhat. The details get lost, and details are sort of the sausage and beans of erotica, as it were... That said, it's still quite good, and a poor concept well-executed still shows solid writing chops.

5923501 Thank you :twilightsmile: We can say the experiment was a modest success, then. For science!

I call this experiment a success! I loved Rainbow's line “Your mane smells so good...” Before that line, it wasn't clear when Rainbow had put it in and how far she had gone. But that line conjured up a great mental image of Dash squeezed all the way in, lying slumped over Pinkie's body. If anything, this fic feels too short. I had to continue the dialogue in my head.

Dash smacking Pinkie's butt?
Instant fave.

Wow. That was hot, even if it was just dialogue. Great work. *hoof to chin* I may try this....:pinkiehappy:

Huh, I've never seen a clopfic like this. Impressive.

“Y-Yes. It’s the butt I’ve always dreamed of. The butt dreams are made of. So puffy and round and perfect and it waves in the most adorable way when you walk. It’s so soft and yet so firm and I love it so much.”
Ah I Would Have Said Yes To If They Said That To Me

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