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"I, dig a pony, well you can celebrate anything you want, yeah, you can celebrate anything you want..."

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Thanks for the thumbs up - what's "phone booth"?

I loved this! Anice clean exchange with some foundational build up so its not just a clop its a story too :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp:didn't see that coming more soon I hope

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Thanks - I love twists!
More soon? Well okay, but give me a sec to write it.

Ah done...:rainbowlaugh:

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Twue, but what is?

That was radically hot... and then surprisingly sweet.

I dig it.

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I could not ask for a better compliment for this story.
Thanks.
:rainbowlaugh:

Got more to go but I need to take a little break.. (gotta get back to Tomorrow Never Knows)
:twilightoops: :ajsmug:

I lied. Two more chapters in the hopper. They should be up by Monday.

Yes! A million times yes! Moar!

I'm so tired, I'm feeling so upset.
I'm so tired, I need another cigarette.
And curse Sir Walter Raleigh,
he was such a stupid git.

That clop... wow. :ajsmug:

Comment posted by IDigAPony deleted Sep 14th, 2014

Hay not bad... I am only three post in but I can see it has great potential. I am giving it a like. The rest of the characters will need to be something awful for me to think otherwise. Which I will read more as time goes on...
Darker Shadows will be watching...

Ah I'm so confused... I can't tell if she was doing the actions to "tell" her that she really did love her or not... I'm usually into the soarin-dash fics but I stumbled upon this one... at first I thought it was soarin-dash. But when I realized it wasn't I was already hooked. It gives me a whole new respect for ms harshwhinney!

Edit: oh and I love it! But I still feel bad for soarin... I'm a guy. Still gotta root for my side. Lol

I swear there had better be more. Lol

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There is a TON more - the entire story here (book 1, 2 and 3) is not even half...
And Soarin will be in book 2, in fact he has his own story within it...

I skipped over some of the lurid details of future ownership near the end, I dunno tacky maybe. Otherwise enjoying this

“He wants you to meet him in MANEHATTAN?!! That’s, I mean…kind of a long way away. I’m not sure I like that. You’d have to spend the night there.”

“No, it’s cool, he got me my own room. Two nights”

I'd be terrified I was being set up to be horribly murdered, but that's just me.

Okay, real talk time. There's a few typos here and there, nothing a quick sweep couldn't clear up. I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to. I hate to impose. Aside from that, I have a teeny, tiny gripe with the presentation. Namely that the dialogue only structure falls apart if there are more than two characters in a scene. A quick fix here on FimFic is just assigning colors to each character's dialogue. Also, I admittedly am not a HUGE fan of dialogue only stories, but it's not necessarily a deal-breaker.

Well, enough of that; on to chapter two!
And I'm calling the secret admirer being Spitfire now.

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"I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to."

Thanks, I'd really appreciate the help. :twilightsmile:
Spitfire.... Hmmmm

"Do me a favor, will you?”

“Sure thing, what is it?”

“No matter what happens, don’t ever change, stay bold and brave and sweet and remember that you cheered me up when I really needed it.”

“Will do. ‘Night”

“Good night Ms Dash.”

Real fucking smooth there, Rainbow.:ajsmug:

Warning - a little clop....

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Also: Ahh! It's not dialogue only anymore!

Lying asleep on the bed was Harmony Harshwhinny. Dash cleared her throat. No response. She went over to the left side of the bed and sat down.

She gonna touch dat flank, right?

Dash put her hoof on Harshwhinny's-

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-shoulder and shook it lightly.

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It was for sleeping pills and it had been filled yesterday.
...
Harshwhinny eyes opened slightly more then closed.

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"Owe patient 15" There had only been 15 in the bottle!

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