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Thanks for the thumbs up - what's "phone booth"?
Ok first time I express myself with gift but Oh well !
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I loved this! Anice clean exchange with some foundational build up so its not just a clop its a story too
didn't see that coming more soon I hope
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Thanks - I love twists!
More soon? Well okay, but give me a sec to write it.
Ah done...
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Twue, but what is?
That was radically hot... and then surprisingly sweet.
I dig it.
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I could not ask for a better compliment for this story.
Thanks.
Got more to go but I need to take a little break.. (gotta get back to Tomorrow Never Knows)
I lied. Two more chapters in the hopper. They should be up by Monday.
Yes! A million times yes! Moar!
I'm so tired, I'm feeling so upset.
I'm so tired, I need another cigarette.
And curse Sir Walter Raleigh,
he was such a stupid git.
That clop... wow.
Oh man I loved this chapter!
Hay not bad... I am only three post in but I can see it has great potential. I am giving it a like. The rest of the characters will need to be something awful for me to think otherwise. Which I will read more as time goes on...
Darker Shadows will be watching...
Ah I'm so confused... I can't tell if she was doing the actions to "tell" her that she really did love her or not... I'm usually into the soarin-dash fics but I stumbled upon this one... at first I thought it was soarin-dash. But when I realized it wasn't I was already hooked. It gives me a whole new respect for ms harshwhinney!
Edit: oh and I love it! But I still feel bad for soarin... I'm a guy. Still gotta root for my side. Lol
I swear there had better be more. Lol
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There is a TON more - the entire story here (book 1, 2 and 3) is not even half...
And Soarin will be in book 2, in fact he has his own story within it...
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I skipped over some of the lurid details of future ownership near the end, I dunno tacky maybe. Otherwise enjoying this
I'd be terrified I was being set up to be horribly murdered, but that's just me.
Okay, real talk time. There's a few typos here and there, nothing a quick sweep couldn't clear up. I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to. I hate to impose. Aside from that, I have a teeny, tiny gripe with the presentation. Namely that the dialogue only structure falls apart if there are more than two characters in a scene. A quick fix here on FimFic is just assigning colors to each character's dialogue. Also, I admittedly am not a HUGE fan of dialogue only stories, but it's not necessarily a deal-breaker.
Well, enough of that; on to chapter two!
And I'm calling the secret admirer being Spitfire now.
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"I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to."
Thanks, I'd really appreciate the help.
Spitfire.... Hmmmm
Real fucking smooth there, Rainbow.
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Also: Ahh! It's not dialogue only anymore!
She gonna touch dat flank, right?
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