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Thanks for the thumbs up - what's "phone booth"?

“He wants you to meet him in MANEHATTAN?!! That’s, I mean…kind of a long way away. I’m not sure I like that. You’d have to spend the night there.”

“No, it’s cool, he got me my own room. Two nights”

I'd be terrified I was being set up to be horribly murdered, but that's just me.

Okay, real talk time. There's a few typos here and there, nothing a quick sweep couldn't clear up. I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to. I hate to impose. Aside from that, I have a teeny, tiny gripe with the presentation. Namely that the dialogue only structure falls apart if there are more than two characters in a scene. A quick fix here on FimFic is just assigning colors to each character's dialogue. Also, I admittedly am not a HUGE fan of dialogue only stories, but it's not necessarily a deal-breaker.

Well, enough of that; on to chapter two!
And I'm calling the secret admirer being Spitfire now.

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"I can do some cataloging, but only if you want me to."

Thanks, I'd really appreciate the help.
Spitfire.... Hmmmm