• Member Since 24th Jul, 2014
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Lunerpet


I'm a huge MLP fan, I love Fluttershy the most and I enjoy writing, gaming and making friends.

Comments ( 29 )

Just saying, your grammar is horrible, and the dialogue comes straight out of a bad porno, but damn is it fun!

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Porno can have good writing. There's no need to just completely give up because it's porn.

4743772 There are plenty of clopfic a that are extremely well written.

why is it 90% of the stuff uploaded to this site atm is weird fetish incest shit and futa shit. What happened to the actual stories

4743727 Your right, I missed that, haha, my bad.

A nice bit 'o mindless porn.

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If you read the descriptions, you'll know. and if ya don't like, then don't read it, sonny.

How much do you like applejack!!!!!!:ajsmug:

If you could make a sequel to this I personally would gladly read it and I think there are quite a few more that would agree with me.

4746145 Applejack is awesome! I really enjoy her in my fic's!

Well... this escalated quickly :P

You could just have the RD tag, the Mane 6 tag and the Ditzy tag.

:ajsleepy: :derpyderp2: :flutterrage: :heart: :pinkiehappy:
Those were my reactions. :eeyup:

I have seen this on another site. I quite like both versions.

Why are they all virgins?

Seriously, why are all of the Mane 6 virgins? I don't understand!

TFZ

4743772 lol this dialogue its like one of those bad pornos you find on the internet..........wait a minute. :pinkiegasp::trollestia:

*Ahem* Hot. boner inducing hot. Painfully hot.

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probably because each and every one of them discovers their colt friend in the show(well, maybe not Flutters) and there is nothing about pregnancy except the baby cakes.

Ok, I really need to say it. I love the story, but the fact that you start literally every paragraph of the sex scenes with "Ahhhhhhhhhh!" is very likely to annoy a lot of readers. I'm not really picky, but when that becomes a staple of your sex scenes, it gets old really quick. Again, I like the story a lot, but it probably be best to drop every single one of those out of it.

For some reason every time I read "AAAAAAHHHHHHH" I read it like someone angrily screaming, and it's freaking hilarious

Imagine Hulk Hogan and Arnold Schwarzenegger reading this

Okay, so imagine these people reading for theses characters: Morgan Freeman as Derpy, Dane Cook as Rainbowdash, Danny DeVito as Pinkie Pie

Okay, everyone else keeps their actors if they already got one, but keep Fluttershy the same, and change Twilight to Vincent D'Onofrio, the guy who played Kingpin or Fisk on Daredevil

So, wait, are the mane 6 all together, or jest all with R.D.

p.s. Can T.S. make the other mares have stallion-hoods, or is R.D. going 2 be the Dad of all the kids ?

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