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May thirteenth, Mother's Day in Equestria. It was one of the more secluded holidays, as families would get together and honor their mother. Unlike Hearth's Warming Eve or Nightmare Night, it wasn't a community event. It was a family event. And sometimes the ponies needed that, a little time to celebrate away from the community. The ponies gathered in houses and had large meals. Fillies did all the chores that their mom would usually do, cleaning the house and cooking breakfast for the families. Of course, the father would have to help unless they wanted everything to catch fire.
Many of the mothers spent the day relaxing, or spending a day off in the spa. Some of them went out with their families to be together in a picnic or restaurant meal. They received hoof-made cards from the children and gifts from the older ponies. It was a special day indeed, and it was no different for the ponies of Ponyville.
Applejack trotted down a long dirt path. The sun was blocked out by some clouds but the pegasi would have it cleared soon. It was warm out, not too hot, not too cold. Large trees stood to the side of the trail, casting shade on it when the sun came out. Pegasi moved the clouds around in the sky, opening up holes for the sun to shine through, and then they went straight back to celebrating with their mothers.
Applejack looked up and saw her destination. She slowly blinked once before resuming her trot. She couldn't help but think about where all her friends were.
Twilight was out in Canterlot with her parents. They were inside the royal castle having a large feast full of the best daisies and hay grown in Equestria. Shining Armor's position on the Royal Guard and Twilight's affiliation with Princess Celestia granted them access to the large dining hall. Ponies wearing chef hats trotted in and out of the room carrying silver plates with a variety of food on them. Twilight's mother sat at the head of the table. Each member of the family spoke of her, saying how much they loved her and the most memorable moments they had had with her. Twilight's father had an especially large amount to say about her.
After the wonderful meal they would all go out into Canterlot and trot around for a while, allowing Twilight's mother to buy whatever she pleased. They planned to end the day on top of a mountain, looking up at the stars as a family. Shining Armor had taken an entire day off of the Royal Guard for the events, appointing another stallion to take his position for the day.
Rarity hadn't even went away from Ponyville. Her parents had come to visit her in the boutique. As if it weren't obvious before they had gotten there, Rarity "surprised" her mother with an expensive trip to the spa. Rarity would be coming with her, of course. Sweetie Belle and her father stayed at the house, spending the day cooking a wonderful dinner, or learning how to cook a wonderful dinner. Sweetie Belle knew nothing about cooking, and neither did her father, so they spent half the day burning every single type of food they could find, and the other half using a cookbook to teach them exactly what to do. When Rarity and her mother came back from a relaxing day at the spa, a delicious dinner would be waiting on the table. That was, of course, if Sweetie Belle and her father didn't eat it all first.
Pinkie Pie had gone back to the rock farm to meet up with her parents. Ever since she had earned her cutie mark, her parents had lightened up and weren't the strict farm ponies that she grew up with. They had even converted the rock farm to an actual farm, where crops grew and the dirt wasn't covered in gray rocks. Since they were just outside of Ponyville, they had plenty of room for a picnic. Taking some of the freshly grown crops, Pinkie's sisters packed up a basket of vegetables and the family headed out to enjoy a picnic in the sunlight. They enjoyed memories of the rock farm and how much their mother had changed since those days.
Rainbow Dash was off in Las Pegasus, where her parents lived. She didn't see them very often, but when she did it was always a fun time. Rainbow's mother shared her love of flying, not so much stunts, however. Unlike most mothers, she preferred to go flying with Rainbow Dash rather than go to the spa or have a picnic. They both despised spas and having their hooves touched. Flying through the sky was the only activity that they could both enjoy together. Afterwards, they planned to go back and have a family dinner, where Rainbow Dash would present the gift she got her mother.
Fluttershy was visiting her mother outside of Ponyville. She didn't really talk about her parents, or give any information about them. They were a shy family, and preferred nature over other ponies. With a basket full of fresh food, they set out to have a picnic near a tree, where Fluttershy made friends with all the birds and the bunnies. Her mother joined her, playing with the bunnies and the birds. Fluttershy and her mother shared a love of animals, and they felt at home around them. Underneath the shade of the tree, they ate food and talked, remembering when they used to live in Cloudsdale, and when Fluttershy was just a filly. Fluttershy's mom pushed her to be her best at flying, and it was only her that kept her to keep going to flight school. Once Fluttershy found the ground, her parents had to move to the ground, too. After all the food, Fluttershy gave her mother a hug, and they trotted back to the house to enjoy the rest of the day.
Applejack passed the fence, the dirt road coming to an end. The sun was still high up in the sky, shining down on her. Looking up into the sky, Applejack removed her hat and held it by her heart. She looked down at the stone, gray and cracked. It was worn down, the etching illegible after being eroded by rain and snow. Applejack laid down on the ground, placing the hat in front of the stone. She bowed her head and felt her eyes start to water up. Even though the words couldn't be made out, she knew what it said.
Every Mother's Day Applejack would visit the grave. She didn't want to stay home and not celebrate the holiday, it would make her even sadder. The only memories Applejack had of her mother were whatever she could remember from when she was a filly. Applejack remembered the one mother's day she was able to celebrate with her mother around. Embracing her mother and spending the entire day with her, bucking apples and making delicious treats for the entire apple family to enjoy. Sitting in front of the grave always brought back memories.
Applejack refused to cry. Crying wouldn't do any good for her mother. Mother's Day was a day to celebrate, not to mourn, and Applejack knew that. She came to the grave not to grieve, but to remember. The memories that Applejack's mother left with her were all she needed. The influence she had was even greater. Applejack remembered her mother yelling at her, but always for good cause. Whenever Applejack was scared or sad her mother would comfort her. In the time that Applejack knew her mother she had engraved memories into Applejack's mind that she could never forget.
The physical form may have not been there, but the memories were. Applejack took in a deep breath. As long as she never forgot the memories, her mother would always live on. Applejack looked up at the sky, as she always did. Usually when she did so it would be because she was hopelessly searching for her mother in the sky, but this time it was different. She knew her mother as a filly, and loved her. And now that it was Mother's Day, Applejack could celebrate how great of a mother she was when she was around. Granny Smith would surely have stories of her as a filly. In the years before, Applejack didn't want to hear anything about her mother on Mother's Day. She just wanted to go to the grave, mourn, and not be reminded the rest of the day.
Applejack stared at the gravestone and took in another deep breath. Her mother was still alive, and Applejack knew it. The memories kept her alive. There was no reason to mourn about the loss. She had an uncontrollable smile on her face as tears formed in her eyes, but she refused to cry. She blinked a few times to get rid of the tears. Applejack put a hoof on the tombstone and closed her eyes. The only memories she had played through her head.
There was no bringing her back, and Applejack knew she couldn't. But her mother wouldn't want her to spend Mother's Day lying near a grave and mourning. Applejack knew that her mom loved her as a filly, and wherever she was now, Applejack knew that her mom still loved her. The few memories that she had of her mother played through her head. She kept her eyes closed, allowing her mind to drift off and reminisce.
"Applejack!"
Sunlight rushed into her pupils as her eyes shot open. Applejack lifted herself off the ground and turned, looking for the voice that called her name. A tall pony came into view. Applejack broke out into a wide grin and let out a high-pitched squeal. She galloped toward the pony as fast as her short legs could take her. Within a moment, Applejack leaped into the air and embraced the pony, her hooves barely touching on the other side of the pony's neck. They held their embrace for a short while. When Applejack finally let go, she dropped to the ground. Without knowing why, she took a quick glance at the field behind her. It was empty. Then she turned back and gazed into the pony's eyes.
"Hello, Applejack," said the pony.
"Hello mom."
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Why did I write this? IDK
Is it any good? IDK
Is it ridiculously generic? Probably
Is it wrong to assume that Applejack's parents are dead? Yes
Does that mean I shouldn't? No
Happy Mother's Day? Happy Mother's Day.
Not sure why I wrote this fic, or what I was trying to get at with it, but here it is.
You probably won't understand the ending.
Looks like this is coming out AFTER mother's day because it's so far up the queue and got approved so late. Oh well, looks like we'll all just have to deal with it.
Wait....Applejacks mom....didn't die?
This story made me happy
and sad 
at the same time.....
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You're not assuming she's dead. We just don't know. We haven't heard a darn thing about them in the show, so you're just elaborating on possibilities.
There's nothing wrong with that in my books.
Also, I'm not sure what to make of the ending, but I think that's what you were going for.
Either way, it's a great piece. I love how you go into detail about what each of the mane 6 are doing for the day, and how it's all wonderfully in character.
Good show.
Edit: The tiniest of typos I just notice now. The last sentence doesn't have a comma.
I've been thinking more on the significance of Applejack looking into the empty field behind her. That's in there for a reason, but I can't put my finger on it. Is it symbolic? For the empty life AJ left behind of wallowing in self-pity to looking forward and being happy for the times she and her mother had together?
You've got me thinking hard, TO.
586772
If it's any consolation, it's still Mother's Day where I am.
And you're right about not understanding the ending. I am confused, but regardless this was a nice little piece regarding Mother's Day.
that ending... i did get it... well im pretty sure i do.
Favorited. When I saw the title and the accompanying picture, I had to read it. My Mom has been passed for several years now, and Mother's Days since then are always very painful to me, being surrounded by friends and people talking about what they're doing for the day. I don't care if the ending doesn't make sense, this piece made my day a little better.
Actually, Faust confirmed that her own canon is that the parents are dead, but followed it up with the usual "Don't listen to anything I say because I'm not involved" disclaimer.
I enjoyed this story alot. However, be careful, because the middle part was a little repetitive. Ironically, I had posted a similar story a few minutes before I saw yours, but with Twilight instead.
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"To put it bluntly, we just never figured it out. I just liked the feeling of them living with their Granny, but keeping the family dynamic tight and small. To be honest, I would like to simply say that they passed away somehow, but it's just too sad for a kids' show and I don't think it would have ever been approved. There was brief discussion of them being traveling salesponies or explorers, but since we never needed the information in an episode, nothing was ever made official. So it will have to remain a mystery until someone decides to define it."
Eh, I think them living with Granny inherently suggests they're dead....or worse. Then again, I hail from a community where its terribly common for kids to be raised by their grandparents because Mom n Dad are either dead, strung out, or locked up. Sigh.
Mother's Day
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Badly photoshopped, I know, but it's still relavant to this story (and funny too).
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Yerp, that would be interview I read.
A little short but thumbs up
Sadly for me this only brought up some bad memories, good ones as well but my mothers day has changed and will stay that way for a long time.
But it's a good story, happy and sad at the same time.
Thanks
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She's dead, the end was a memory
When I wanted to see some mothers day stories I get this?...
I liked it
Touching. I´m guessing the ending is more metaphorical than anything but touchign not the less. I like it!
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I dont understand why so many guys think they are dead. I still think they´re settlers or something like that and they´re somewhere in Equestria to found a new Farm and village. And they let Applejack and Macintosh stay on Sweet Apple Acres so they could help Granny Smith and someday take care of the farm on their own. Apple Bloom is there probably to help too or because their parents wanted that their children are together.
I enjoyed this. It mostly made me sad because I thought of myself standing at the many graves of my extended family (cousins, grandparents, aunts, uncles) with a feeling of nothing more than solemnity. 'Course, I've never lost a parent or anything like we assume Applejack has.
I kind of do think that the ending is a memory but who knows?
And of course I'm pretty sure Applejack's parents will always be assumed to be dead since at least for now they serve no purpose to any sort of plot, but who knows maybe Season 3 will change that?
The end is a memory, "She galloped toward the pony as fast as her SHORT legs could take her." "Applejack leaped into the air and embraced the pony, her hooves BARELY TOUCHING on the other side of the pony's neck." Applejacks remembering running to and hugging her mother when she was a filly.
593409 good job
My heart sank when i saw the picture, but this was a great story.
Celestia damn it...
You made a tough marine bi*ch cry. I hope you're happy. Jerk.
THIS.... was a good, sad story.
Even I can't deny that, I was a little confused about the ending
, but it was one of those kind of endings that you kind of don't care how or why it happened. All and all I loved it.
Good fic, but picture confuses me. Isn't that Rainbow Dash's feather?
602477 Not many other pictures that fit the fic existed. So oh well...
602477 *insert keanu reeves pic* What if Applejack's mother IS Rainbow Dash? DUN DUN DUNH
That was a nice, short little story. Well done
589747
As for the story, it was a good one. Not too short, not too long, just right. Thanks
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The ending seems unfinished and it seems to be missing a lot of potential emotion. Keep it up though.
D'aww
The ending is incredibly unfinished and needs expansion as well as a whole lot of soaking-wet emotional laundry.
What happened in the end?
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I'm pretty sure the ending is Applejack's memory of her only Mother's Day with her mom. It even says that Applejack started to think about the past. It would be nice if her mother had come to visit her as a ghost, but I think it's best as it is, with it ending as Applejack's memory.