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note that the alternate universe tag is only there because I fiddled with the ages of the ponies a bit.
Otherwise its normal.
A little story I wrote while I had writer's block. I started it a month ago, and decided to finish it a day or two ago. Chapters will be added every couple hours.
Otherwise, enjoy this tale, its a very uncomfortable genre for me, and it was uncomfortable to write, but I did anyway.
There's probably a billion grammar/spelling errors that I missed, so if you find any feel free to point them out.
Back to my other stories.
i like it
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Trixie, DONT CRY
wow very good story very well written i wish she went back in time would make a good story but i understand the ending and like it good job
475700 At first I was sad because I read the story but then I saw your post and laughed.
Very good story by the way. One thing that was confusing was how the time jumped around though because it would say years had passed and then start talking about the next day. The ending kind of sounded like a sharing of a personal epiphany though it did seem kind of selfish to deny pip a life so she could have her show.
I just came back here after reading The Last Crusade, and that story made me realize that this story deserves a lot more praise.
This is one of sad stories here that is actually SAD, most other sad stories here are just 2000 words for "then x pony died in y fashion and everypony was sad" but THIS story actually takes the time to establish a setting, include scenery, and have a plot twist that I couldn't have guessed from the title. I can honestly say that this is one of the best sad stories I have read on this site, so seeing as how you are now my only perceived source of quality sad stories, I would encourage you to keep writing. If only for my sake.
I just finished reading this story and have to say that I'm honestly amazed at how little attention this story has received. Just as Reaverzappy said, this story is truly a sad story with it's own setting and flavors separate from your average fic. The characters are well built and the devices used to lead the reader and character to the final point are pure genius. I am a big fan of sad fics, they make me feel better after reading them(Is that weird?) and I have to admit I loved this story. I'm passing it on to anypony I think will like it.
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you ever feel likelife is just rushing past you, but there are those days you'll never forget?
thats what I was trying to capture.
Well written and nice flow of story
Gets a like and favourite from me
This was GREAT! The writing that is, not the fact that I almost cried. I admit it I almost cried.
this reminds Honeytiger if my little dashie a bit.