Equestria has changed.
Princess Celestia and Luna have disappeared just as foreigners have come to change everypony's lives. Skyscrapers, TVs, cars, handheld video games--technology of all kinds can now be found in this land of Magic. But at the moment, Pipsqueak has to deal with the laziest boss in the world.
As he meets all of his old friends from Ponyville, what will he learn about the dark truth of the Wars that happened a decade ago?
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I'd never thought I see a day where MLP and Gintama came together.
Def. fave and track - I'm really interested to see where this goes.
Interesting.... i'll track it
Seems very Interesting *tracked*
Pretty good so far. Some grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be fixed with a quick looking-over.
a very good start to a cool story.....keep it up, cant wait to see what happens next.
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Heheh, I made sure to get the most egregious mistakes such as story incomprehensibility but some minor problems will always get through unnoticed. I'll get around to cleaning up my gammar/spelling in the near future, but thanks for reading in the first place to notice them!
Oh this sounds interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Amazing! I love Pip and Dinky together! *tracks*
:3 i like this story
Coolio, though, and this is incredibly picky, I wish you would capitalize all of the words in the titles of the chapters.
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I don't know what y'all talkin' 'bout!
Nuthin' at all 'bout fixin' up those titles...
303829 Coolio.
good job on the 3rd chapter, keep up the good work on the rest if theres more
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Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool x D'awwwwwww + Wat= This story
Good job!
i must know what happened to twilight now now now now
so first he meets dinky , now hes run into scootaloooo my god pip your a ladies man you are, whars next sweetie bell and applebloom man is this going to be interesting.
The new voice interrupted the man's thoughts as his attention toward to the pony he had been apparently sitting at the table that Pip had been thrown into.
lolwut
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And luls were had by all!
Fixed.
ok can i ask something what the hell happned to the mane 6 in this world, i mean i know the princesses gave up and left ut what about the mane 6?????
^ what he said. it feels like im not getting enough info that i need to really like this story.
Stories take time, I'm sure we'll know what happened to everypony as the story goes on.
I didn't get this chapter. >_<
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Well...that's not good!
Please PM me the problems you had about the chapter.
366027 no, it just went a bit too fast for me
love th' canon story so far. keepitup! preferrably with more frequent updates.
“Twilight turned the to rest of the team. “We can do this you guys. As long as we have teamwork, we can use our friendship and defeat that evil warlord, Davidson.”
you might want to fix the "the to rest of the team part" unless this is supposed to be like that.
ok that was alot of garbage the fan story if i was reading it i would be clicking next story so fast you wouldnt blink. aside from that good story, also note to author pleae please dont ever write like that again. my mind and brain are still trying to get over that lame story at the beginning.
It was good at the beginning, but this is going to make the story go on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and- you get the point, i think this chapter ruined what you started with, pip and dinky meeting. Anyway, it was a good story, but confusing
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Nah, unlike the show I'm using as a skeleton for this story, I have a definite end in mind.
But I see your concern and...
I KNOW WHAT MUST BE DONE
very good adaptation. I'm a big fan of the original story, a big fan
my advice would be to try to add something more than the spark of the characters that each plays in the history.
do not forget that the original story contains a huge number of jokes and parodies.
proceed with the story, is fantastic. I'm waiting to see who will play the role of Katsura and Hijikata in their work.
(forgive my bad English)
The first part confused me to a great extent.... but other than that i like it
Fun fact: Ashleigh Ball is currently voicing for Ayame Sarutobi in Gintama.