NICE! Been waiting on this, and it didn't disappoint! Bout time to see Ever Ring get what she deserves..... interestingly enough I'm reading another story with "Ever Ring" in it and she's pretty much the polar opposite of this bitch haha.
Oh and...
The only thing that could make the spider even scarier would be if it was working for some mob where the boss had an obvious name that went over everyone’s head.
The amount of crossovers and jumps between stories is awesome! Scary is best character EVER! ..... Speakeasy is just a plain ol' bastard. Please tell me that HE isn't making a cameo! haha
I ran into female Scary at the top step, who gave me a gentle nod. Even after those animal lessons with Fluttershy, seeing this much intelligence from a spider was kind of frightening. The only thing that could make the spider even scarier would be if it was working for some mob where the boss had an obvious name that went over everyone’s head.
Oh my, the references. SCARY! SO MUCH YAY!
lordy lordy! You made my day, you made my day XD hahahahaa, nice man, nice chapter, I liked what he did for the foals, that was sweet. (wow I forgot his name, good going me)
Oh man pusspuss and enigmatic otkau would be impressed with the references And I've noticed everscinc scary was introduced in "bonbon's acceptance" the entire fandom ( who knew about scary) agent all of ape shit Also he better be inna cameo :-!
Heeeeell yeaaaa. Im very happy that this has an update! And it was really heartwarming what he did. As well as his slowly growing relationship with Fleetfoot. She's a cutie!
6197711 That has the makings of a vicious cycle. She can't get the D because she's a total bitch, and all that sexual frustration feeds back and makes her even more of a bitch, which makes stallions even less willing to give her a good fucking, which fuels her frustration, and so on and so forth, until it erupts in a huge explosion of sexual frustration that covers every inch of Equestria with a gooey, sticky, sexy mess.
6196650 She probably ran off to get the cops/guards in order boot Mark from Cloudsdale. But if what Mark found is in any way as damning as he thinks it is, going to the cops would be a very bad idea for our Queen Bitch.
6198681 Wild Mass Guessing time: He's gonna be the one to take care of them! He'll open his own orphanage on the ground, and everyone will be okay with it because reasons!
You know... I would love to see a face off between Ever Ring and Ms.Harshwhinny. I would totally love to watch those two go at it. Fighting that is... not well... on second thought that might be pretty hot. Oh gawd... The lewd thoughts be real.
Anyways. Great chapter! Can't wait till that bitch gets what she deserves.
No offense, but if ponies who were foals here keep growing up and keep going to the princesses telling them what a horrible person she is, eventually they're going to seek other means to close the place down, proof or no proof. Like "A radical readjustment of service funding in the Clouddale district means we're having to make some sacrifices Ms. Ever Ring, so I'm afraid your orphanage lost it's government funding. Ohh Don't worry about the foals, they're all going to be transferred to the Lucky Shine Orphanage down in Fillydelphia on Monday." One complaint might be a malicious attack on her, two is going to make me think twice, and three is going to have me scouring the Royal Guard for that one mare who's planning on taking double majors in Foal Care and Education once she serves her tour, and going "How do you feel about undercover investigations."
things are happening.
NICE! Been waiting on this, and it didn't disappoint! Bout time to see Ever Ring get what she deserves..... interestingly enough I'm reading another story with "Ever Ring" in it and she's pretty much the polar opposite of this bitch haha.
Oh and...
The amount of crossovers and jumps between stories is awesome! Scary is best character EVER! ..... Speakeasy is just a plain ol' bastard. Please tell me that HE isn't making a cameo! haha
IT HAPPENING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6196623 He won't be making cameo.
Things are starting to pick up in that department, and the intrigue is a nice touch as well..but where did our 'beloved' unicorn matron run off to?
Oh my, the references.
SCARY! SO MUCH YAY!
lordy lordy! You made my day, you made my day XD
hahahahaa, nice man, nice chapter, I liked what he did for the foals, that was sweet. (wow I forgot his name, good going me)
Awesome chapter!
Ooooooo iam loving this
6196647 YAY! Thank Celestia.... you can keep female Scary though. That spider rocks!
I swear if you don't have Ever Ring facing justice next chapter I will scream.
Oh man pusspuss and enigmatic otkau would be impressed with the references
And I've noticed everscinc scary was introduced in "bonbon's acceptance" the entire fandom ( who knew about scary) agent all of ape shit
Also he better be inna cameo :-!
I believe that you are familiar with 'Bon Bon's Acceptance' and 'The third Roommate' I presume?
6197119 Very.
6197132 Well, I can't blame ya! Both stories are pretty great, yours included
6197222 Thanks. Those are very good.
There's a rumor that Mark is "Princess Luna’s concubine"? I don't remember seeing anything like that.
Great chapter I cant wait for more!
All those toys in Mordor... maybe that's why she's a bitch all the time. Can't find anyone that wants to give her the d.
Looking forward to justice being served, in some sort of way.
Great chapter. I've become very interested in this Fic, and I'm definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!
Aw man....
It;s getting good.
6197711 Poor Ever Ring. How can she be the antagonist now that we know what she has to go through?
6197556 Mark being Luna's "concubine" was mentioned in an earlier chapter.
Heeeeell yeaaaa. Im very happy that this has an update! And it was really heartwarming what he did. As well as his slowly growing relationship with Fleetfoot. She's a cutie!
But the question remains, if Ever Ring gets convicted, who's gonna take care of the kids?
6198538 That's the surprise.
Genterbent Scary whose name is Frightening.
6198993 Get out of my head! How in the world, with as many possible names there are, did you figure out the name?
6198999
Cause that's the name I'd use.
6199005 Sometimes it's hard to be angry with you when you're right.
6199007
orig13.deviantart.net/3fac/f/2015/176/1/5/eni_by_kmwolf-d8yrp6b.gif
6199012 I have no comeback for this. I was not prepared for this. This is a secret, so don't tell Puss.
6197711
That has the makings of a vicious cycle. She can't get the D because she's a total bitch, and all that sexual frustration feeds back and makes her even more of a bitch, which makes stallions even less willing to give her a good fucking, which fuels her frustration, and so on and so forth, until it erupts in a huge explosion of sexual frustration that covers every inch of Equestria with a gooey, sticky, sexy mess.
6196650
She probably ran off to get the cops/guards in order boot Mark from Cloudsdale. But if what Mark found is in any way as damning as he thinks it is, going to the cops would be a very bad idea for our Queen Bitch.
6196640
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/242/631/382.gif
neat
stayclassy
6199345 But going to a higher power is better, so that you know that no one is being paid off.
6199025 i would have gone with terror because it sounds like Terra from teen titans
6199469 I probably would have gone with it if the spider was more of a rock acclimated.
Neither a Wonderbolt celebrity or the Princess herself could touch the evil caretaker, yet the helpless human alien got that bitch's dirt first try?
Were those references to Bon Bon's acceptance and the third roommate in this chapter or am I insane.
I'm pretty sure I'm insane anyway so it's all good.
6198681 Wild Mass Guessing time: He's gonna be the one to take care of them! He'll open his own orphanage on the ground, and everyone will be okay with it because reasons!
6199406
True, but does Mark know this?
6200059 No.
6200133 He knows slight what to do, but he's going to try to avoid some things because he doesn't care much for politics.
6200030 Those were references to Bon Bon's Acceptance and The Third Roommate.
6199848 There's a reason why Mark had better luck in getting the evidence.
6200254
6200318 Now that's just hilarious. Still waiting on the next episode.
You know... I would love to see a face off between Ever Ring and Ms.Harshwhinny. I would totally love to watch those two go at it. Fighting that is... not well... on second thought that might be pretty hot.
Oh gawd... The lewd thoughts be real.
Anyways. Great chapter! Can't wait till that bitch gets what she deserves.
6202681 Lewd thoughts are always there.
No offense, but if ponies who were foals here keep growing up and keep going to the princesses telling them what a horrible person she is, eventually they're going to seek other means to close the place down, proof or no proof. Like "A radical readjustment of service funding in the Clouddale district means we're having to make some sacrifices Ms. Ever Ring, so I'm afraid your orphanage lost it's government funding. Ohh Don't worry about the foals, they're all going to be transferred to the Lucky Shine Orphanage down in Fillydelphia on Monday." One complaint might be a malicious attack on her, two is going to make me think twice, and three is going to have me scouring the Royal Guard for that one mare who's planning on taking double majors in Foal Care and Education once she serves her tour, and going "How do you feel about undercover investigations."
I loved it AGAIN this story just gets awesomer each time i read a new chapter keep it up