I dare say, I thought this was cancelled Glad to see that's not happening
Brilliant work you beautiful people~ Hahaha! What a chapter, and poor Spits... poor Spits. ALSO... loving that accent xD hehehe, those two near the end sound funny~
Still wondering if Spitfire was upset because they got together or that Fleetfoot got to him first ... Hard not to notice her eying Marks necklace .... Thank Faust this story is still ongoing ...
Glad to see this back in the air again. I only very much hoping that the events won't play out like the blog described. That is depressing as s**t and I don't read despressing thing
Dash yelped in surprise as she was pulled from the air, a yelp that was silenced when her lips connected with Rarity’s. Dash’s body tensed up and her eyes went wide as Rarity kissed her, but after the momentary surprise she soon relaxed and lost herself in the kiss before they broke away.
You and your RariDash fetish. (And I say this even as I'm putting more RariDash subtext into Chapter 6 of GL:A...)
Welcome back to the land of the living, and nice RvB reference, and I must say that having ones skull ripped from the body before being beaten to death by it does seem physically impossible, unless you teleport said skull out of the head before the beating commences.
7052791 I'm thankful for the compliment, but don't direct praise towards me. Jay The Stormtrooper helped to get it to look like this. Ask him and he'll tell you what it looked like the first time to what it is now. All thanks goes to him and everyone else that helped out.
I haven't commented on this story yet, main reason being I wait to reach the last (current) chapter before commenting so I know everything I can before I comment on the story.
So what do I think... I think I absolutely love this story. Its one of my favourite stories I've read and I look forward to the chapter's to come.
Also I feel that I'm either not taking Silk's reaction to Fleetfoot’s feather seriuously enough or Silk seems to have some unannounced story that may or may not relate to Fleetfoot's life and I'm not talking about what she has said about her herd, I think there's more to it.
7055422 Fleetfoot's feather is to be taken seriously since it is a very intimate gesture for pegasi. It's not something that is done openly, usually only reserved to a select few (close friends, family, and mates they find right for them to stay with).
As for Silk, I can only say that there is much to still be known.
7055452 I didn't mean I wasn't taking it seriously in general, what I meant was that Silk's reaction seemed too... Personal to not mean something extra. I'm excited to see where that leads. Last comment edited.
“Good. Now then, we have everything in order so we should-” Redheart started, only to be cut-off by a loud voice that had a strong resemblance to a Scottish accent to it and was apparently female.
“Oi, what the buck do you think you’re doing?! Watch where you’re putting your bloody hooves! I’m still sensitive from last night!” the voice yelled.
The part with the thestral and her Scottish accent almost made me think you added Flammenwerfer's OC, Stella Sabre.
It was my pleasure to help you, my friend.
Please continue your work and keep head and muzzle up!
UPDATE?!...WOOOOOOO
I dare say, I thought this was cancelled
Glad to see that's not happening
Brilliant work you beautiful people~ Hahaha! What a chapter, and poor Spits... poor Spits.
ALSO... loving that accent xD hehehe, those two near the end sound funny~
Gotta love Redheart, and updates.
Glad to help out. Just scream if you need any more help.
So fucking glad to see this back, though I hope the ending isn't as depressing as the author described in his blog. That was....heavy.
That Scottish accent... Stella?
7051298 You got one of the two.
Still wondering if Spitfire was upset because they got together or that Fleetfoot got to him first ... Hard not to notice her eying Marks necklace ....
Thank Faust this story is still ongoing ...
Glad to see this back in the air again. I only very much hoping that the events won't play out like the blog described. That is depressing as s**t and I don't read despressing thing
Are the thestrals speaking Irish?
Glad to see you back.
Welcomes back
Also nice rvb reference
7051635 There is one thestral speaking Irish, but they are a reference to another story.
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You and your RariDash fetish. (And I say this even as I'm putting more RariDash subtext into Chapter 6 of GL:A...)
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I regret nothing.
Like I said, don't knock it until you try it.
I feel like you're just going to tease the hell out of it, and I'm going to be sad when it doesn't happen.
Also, what did you think of Faran's reference?
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The only picture a person needs in order to make the RariDash ship work.
nice reference
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All these references!
Welcome back to the land of the living, and nice RvB reference, and I must say that having ones skull ripped from the body before being beaten to death by it does seem physically impossible, unless you teleport said skull out of the head before the beating commences.
Mm, got to say, the level of writing quality here has improved dramatically. Well done sir.
Ooooh that dreaded cup though...
Awesomeness! Loved the chapter, can't wait for more!
7051759 Aw hell yes, Stella please!
7052791 I'm thankful for the compliment, but don't direct praise towards me. Jay The Stormtrooper helped to get it to look like this. Ask him and he'll tell you what it looked like the first time to what it is now. All thanks goes to him and everyone else that helped out.
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Still....the jizz cup...
7054237 It's every man's best friend, and it still has a few more appearances.
Yay new chapter!
7054243
I think I'd like to get to know those two thestrals in the other room...
7055131 Because it's important to know how healthy a person is.
As for the thestrals, you'd be lucky to see the light of day ever again.
I haven't commented on this story yet, main reason being I wait to reach the last (current) chapter before commenting so I know everything I can before I comment on the story.
So what do I think... I think I absolutely love this story. Its one of my favourite stories I've read and I look forward to the chapter's to come.
Also I feel that I'm either not taking Silk's reaction to Fleetfoot’s feather seriuously enough or Silk seems to have some unannounced story that may or may not relate to Fleetfoot's life and I'm not talking about what she has said about her herd, I think there's more to it.
7055422 Fleetfoot's feather is to be taken seriously since it is a very intimate gesture for pegasi. It's not something that is done openly, usually only reserved to a select few (close friends, family, and mates they find right for them to stay with).
As for Silk, I can only say that there is much to still be known.
7055452
I didn't mean I wasn't taking it seriously in general, what I meant was that Silk's reaction seemed too... Personal to not mean something extra. I'm excited to see where that leads. Last comment edited.
7055485 Ah, well, I hope you enjoy where it goes.
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Sounds like something that can happen off-screen to me. Y'know unless there's gonna be a, "Hey, guess who's compatible with ponies!" moment...
woah! an update! also,im irish and i approve this story
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Not really saying that it's a bad thing, but Dreamer is a mare you should be careful around.
7056733 I think that I'll take my chances...
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So you also read My Friend, Luna.
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The part with the thestral and her Scottish accent almost made me think you added Flammenwerfer's OC, Stella Sabre.
7057017 Maybe I did as a shout-out to that story.
7057172 Did you just get caught up on this story?
7056873 Then I wish you luck.
7057012 My BEST friend, Luna
7057655
(rechecks Flammenwerfer's story page) Oh. I did not see that new title change.
7057912 Ha! Ya should read it till' the end. It seems you've a lot to read
7058080
I already did read it. I just never noticed the new change in the title.