6405195 *facepalms*
This is not fanfiction. this is fimfiction.

Yay! Another chapter :D

Always with the cliff hangers. Why!?
just imagine reading that in zoiburgs voice from futurama.

6411762 Because cliff hangers are fun.

Whooo! Finally, a new chapter well done, awesome job on this man! :D
hehehee, Fleets asked him out, interesting!~

FEATHER!
Nice job.

Good good...
Now we must wait for spitfire.

Another good chapter.

It's always a pleasure to read clop stories with a smooth buildup and a serious plot.

I wasn't expecting her to be so Forward, I like it.
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Yay another chapter.

6411858 finally one of em gets the courage ta ask and Damn good chapter as always.
Can't wait ta read tha next chapter.

Heh, Mark forced Spits to eat food that fell on the ground.

At long last, that side of things is finally getting ready to open up!

love it

stayclassy

the elemental ferrets

Why are we not calling them Ferrementals?

Wonder if Mark knows the significance of the feather...

6412338 Yeah.

The ship is being built!

this is one of my favorite stories

I heard that she has a new nurse that helps her out here in Canterlot. I can’t remember her name, but she’s foreign. Her names begins with an ‘F’ and rhymes with heron.

I see what you did there....

And I approve!

Also, if you know the pony that I'm referring to, and at least one should recognize it pretty easily since it's from their story, they won't be making an appearance.

Thank goodness for that. I don't think Mark could handle her.

6412767 Mark can't even handle Redheart, and that's going to be made apparent in a few chapters.

6412767 She'd tear him a new one.

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While cursing him out in pony Gaelic, no less.

Another excellent chapter. Really like this buildup and story. It's really well done.

I was taken by surprise when Spitfire’s wings flared out, giving a few strong flaps before gently falling limp.

She was hanging limp in my hands, her body entirely relaxed like a sleeping puppy.

These two lines near the beginning made me kiddy and smile. You have a way of using words to your advantage. Good work.

6412920 Do you truly believe that Mark doesn't know Gaelic?

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Never suggested that he didn't. Just saying what she'd do while "tearing him a new one." 'Cause that's how she rolls.

6412967 Then Faran would have to deal with Spitfire and Fleetfoot, while Mark gets some food to enjoy the show at that point.

Okay, here we go, I haven't done this in a while...

CURSE YOU, CLIFFHANGERS!!!

6412920 Damn, now I want to read that scene.

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And Mark's jaw drops when it somehow devolves into three-way all-mare pony sex.

6413279 Yeah, and Faran keeps him away because she's teaching Fleetfoot and Spitfire on how to be a mare.

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Me too.

6413279 And now I really wish that could be a scene.

6413308 wait your the author........bonus chapter it

Really liking the story so far. I love how the relationships are growing.

My god mark, how stupid can you be?!

6411737 No, no, no. Like this.

This. Is. FIMFICTION! **Kicks down well** Got it?

6414051 *Thinking*
*Drink some tea*

Yes! It's happening! Mark, you must accept!
I really want to know how Mark and Spitfire are going to react to this.

6414237 Down... Down...

Was Spitfire's reaction to Mark not being there when she woke up inspired in some way by this image from a previous blog post?
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6414951 I wish, but it wasn't. There's a different reason behind it, but will be explained later on when I get there.

She has done so much that it’s kind of sad to see all these nobles try and use her slight naivety about being a princess to fulfill their selfish desires.

Can't help but wonder how many of those nobles' selfish desires involve... her, if you know what I mean.

6415045 More than Mark likes to know about.

thank god you updated been waiting forever! Really loved it tho. . Was worth the wait indeed

6414951 Ha ha ha, I can see a demented Herd fic with that sort of thing going on.

I would have asked what this was about, if her next words didn’t halt all functioning of my brain. “Mark, would you like to go out with me tomorrow night?”

Mark.exe has encountered the error "Wait what?" and crashed. Please wait while we reboot the system. If the error continues to occur, please contact a psychological systems expert immediately. Thank you for choosing Project Human as your primary operating system.

6416417 It's a reference to Your Human and You by MadMaxtheBlack.

Dammit Mark. You tell these two about your seven month hiatus, and don't expect them to probably try to help you out in the near future with that? You basically just put yourself on the market, as the most wanted item.

Normally, this kind of situation isn't a problem, but... it's Mark. He treats Fleetfoot & Spitfire like bros. If not bros, then those who have been unintentionally friend zoned. Living together might get awkward, or stay slightly the same.

Onward. To more embarrassing, unexpected, jealous, & jaw dropping moments. Who knows, Mark might have a hoofie j, coming his way.

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Ouch!

Do you think there's a specific date for the next chapter duelist