'The story so far: In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move'- Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe
Celestia thinks it is time for the rest of the main six to ascend and finally become alicorns. She watched her student do the same, and believes it is time, even if her sister disagrees. But is this what they really want? Is it their destiny?
Thanks for reading. Constructive criticism is appreciated, thanks 
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Awesome
5819699 thanks for reading! I had this idea in my head for a while
5819712 no problem it was a brilliant story
5819723 thank you, this took me a while to write
5819733 tis only the truth
5819731 glad you enjoyed it! ( that is probably my favourite part
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5819746 You're welcome! Great story!
5819749 thank you!
5819763 You're welcome!
No mistakes, and it's not a bad story. It's just not very memorable. Maybe it'd be better if there was more of a story than a single event. Maybe if you described the vision Celestia had, or how Luna got Twilight to come.
This is pretty good
A very interesting premise. I feel like it could have been expanded upon more, though. There is one error--the plural of memory is "memories", not "memory's". Plurals are never formed with apostrophes except for extremely rare occurrences. That aside, you've earned yourself a like.
Loved it!
5820298 thanks for reading, and thank you for the improvements. Maybe one day I'll do a rewrite/ add in extra scenes
5820343 I'm glad you enjoyed it
5820909 thanks for reading! I will now go and change that
5821594 thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much
It's nice to see somepony who truly gets it... Celestia didn't "force" Twilight to become an alicorn. It was Twilight's own magic and will and destiny that made it happen. Celestia only provided her the tools and the path, and let Twilight choose to follow. Celestia was beyond proud... Proud because Twilight ascended... Not for somehow making Twilight ascend, cause she wasn't the one who made it happen.
This story addresses that well, and places Celestia in an over eager position to push the others, only to learn she is powerless to force this on the others, what Twilight achieved and accepted for herself!
Drat!
5824839 that is pretty much my head cannon of it
Thanks for reading!
really enjoyed it!!!
5961044 thanks, I'm glad you did
ist pretty much my head cannon of the whole Twilicorn thing
5961055 ah, I see. It was very enjoyable!
5961057
You know what? This is at least a bit better than "Forever Alone...". Well, actually, the only thing I think is that Princess Celestia and Luna are more like themselves.
But, everypony were themselves and there were barely any grammar issues. Well done! 
6003316 thank you!
Hey! I am here to give a warm welcome to your story, as it has been reviewed and accepted into The Good Fic Bin!
I'll edit this when I find the ribbon
Review can be found here!
6062558 thank you
……Awkward
6215982 eeyup