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Sky Melody


'The story so far: In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move'- Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe

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Honey Rays try's to take on life with its ups and downs. It's not as easy as she first thought. Maybe it doesn't help that she has a sister who could pass for a model, a bubbly pegasi PFF and a few other friends and enemies who all don't seem to help.

Maybe one day she'll learn what Princess Twilight Sparkle always says...





Other character tag for lack of, Honey Rays, Sunny Rays and Skywishes tags.



As usual, tell me any mistakes or improvements! Thanks

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 24 )

I like this! I spotted one mistake but I cant find it :twilightblush:

Also, add the comedy tag! I thought this was funny!

A nice short story, I loved it well besides it's kinda short and it needs a bit more attention grabbing aspects added but over I liked it!
Good job!

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5713434 Thanks for reading! Well, if you find the mistake just tell me and I'll change it. Also, what was funny? I'm curious :twilightsmile:

5713746 the thunderlane and dash part XD I loved it!

5713496 thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy: It is kinda short, but it's not finished yet. This is more to give me a break from writing other things, so that's why it is short, although it's not finished yet. :twilightsmile: I agree on the attention grabbing aspects, I'm not the best at those :twilightoops:

5713755 yeah me neither, my new Fic is a very very difficult consept because it needs teilights casle in detail. ((Slendermane fic)) it's a new project but the same applys here lol

5713751 that makes sense :D that just seemed like something Thunderlane would do, in my mind :twilightsheepish:

5713774 maybe you could just make up what it looks like? That's what I did for another fic of mine :twilightsmile:

5838617 thank you, glad you enjoyed it :D

nice story
When will the next chapter be?

6466730 thanks for reading :pinkiehappy:

And, not too sure if I'm honest, I've had writers block the past few months, though I'll be posting an updates blogs soon :twilightsmile:

71weeks later, still waiting:raritydespair:

7929417 :applecry:sorry. I need more ideas, I was thinking about it last weekend believe it or not:raritydespair:this is one of the fics I'd like to eventually finish

7929824 Shouldn't you put it on hiatus then?:twilightsheepish:

7929834 I've literally only just got your message:applejackconfused:

and if I put it on hiatus I feel like I won't finish it at all:applejackunsure: I don't want that to happen

7980417 Strange:derpyderp2: I know but it's more truthful

7980434 well I'm not trying to lie:fluttershysad::applejackunsure: and I have tried writing it more it just hasn't gone well:facehoof:

7980444 okay:rainbowkiss: sorry:raritydespair: to you and anyone else waiting on this story

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