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Sky Melody


'The story so far: In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move'- Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe

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Rainbow Dash struggles with her feelings for a stallion. Having never felt like this before she feels lost and doesn't feel she can talk to her friends about it. She's meant to be cool, not hopelessly in love.

He's been on her mind for the entire night.

All she needs is to talk...


Written in first person.

Please tell me if you notice any mistakes and I will change them :)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 18 )

Awesome! You should write a sequel. :twilightsmile:

5628130 Glad you liked it! :twilightsmile: Didn't really think about a sequel to be honest but I might write one in the future :scootangel: :yay:

Amazing u should do a sequel anyway who is 'him' I would really like to know

5628739 Thanks :yay: I'm thinking of doing a sequel but I'm still thinking of how it would go if I did write one. :twilightsmile:

As for 'him' that's up to the reader to decide :) However, I imagine it to be a certain pony who would be 'him' if I wrote a sequel. I think you would like 'him' :twilightsmile::scootangel::pinkiehappy:

5628777 Yaay!! I think I know who ur talking abt :rainbowkiss::raritystarry:

SEQUEL IS NEEDED BEFOR I EXPLODE *explodes* Too late....:pinkiehappy:

If you need any ideas for a sequel, you now I'm always here to help :pinkiesmile:

5644874 Yeah, I'm definitely writing a sequel :pinkiehappy: I have a bit of an idea but I need to think of the rest...

5644882 well, I could think up a few more ideas if you want.We could always PM each other our ideas

5644882 :pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:
yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
when?

Sometime in March maybe? I'm still thinking of ideas and this one will probably be longer than last :yay:

5655562 It's a really nice story. Nice job on you. I'd be happy to help pitch a few ideas

5698406 if you want to tell me a few ideas, feel free to PM me. Thanks for reading! :yay:

I WISH 'HIM' WAS SOARIN!!!!! KYAA~!!!

5938407 :rainbowwild: 'him' shall be revealed in the sequel :raritywink:

7423185 I'm glad you enjoyed it:yay:

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