This has promise, but you really need an editor that understands the use of periods and commas. It's riddled with sentence fragments and poor punctuation. This can make it hard to understand.

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EG... mieh...

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I find it highly ironic that your meme about proper comma usage... has missing apostrophes.

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I'll get to proofreading it later. I'm tired and it's late. I have a schedule to keep up too. Sorry for the small errors. This one has been sitting in my box for some time. Just wanted to bring it out.

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5848021 Thank you. I just did a proofread revision of this story. Glad you like it.

5838336 *Let's*

As in, let us.

5959859 Thank you for the help but. Completely unnessary. Most stories have some type of error unless checked over a 100 times over. I'm sorry but I prefer love over these types of things. It's just not logical to point out errors when we're only human and make them time to time. no matter how perfect we are.

5959899 Look one shot story stop author. I've seen your collection. It's not bad but you need to get over the hump of that pride and humble yourself. I have been writing for ten years. No one. And I mean no one needs to be mean in such a hobby.

Fantastic! You captured Sonata's personality perfectly. The ending was a bit ambiguous on a few points, but otherwise an entertaining ride.

6022368 Thank you. Had to do a bit of research on Sonata's persona. Which was difficult since she's only been featured in one movie with minimal screen time. Had to borrow a couple of things from the fandom to create it. hopefully! I get enough time to do the smut scene and start on Aria or Adagio next.

Out of curiosity, how's the next chapter of the story doing?

6704844 Looking forward to it huh? Well lets just say you've helped speed it up.

I'll track this, the structure's a little shaky but the idea and moments are interesting, hope to see more soon

Is this dead?