Fluttershy has never seen or meet a Kirin before in her life. She doesn't even know many dragons because of her fear of them except for Spike that is, but she knew him from when he was a baby dragon. Then one day while she was searching through the Everfree forest, she sees one with her very eyes.
The Kirin, known as Stone, wants to get to know her. He gives her a big smile and a claw to show that he is friendly, but why is she so afraid of him. He had never met another pony other than his father and the first one he meets is untruly terrified of him.
written by Rubyfire377 and Geoice
Chapters (1)
C'mon cuh how you gon write a dragon/kirin story...not about Spike that's just a smack to the face of the almighty Spikey
5693482 Spike does become an important character later on bro
Awesome
5693486 that's good I'm just on a spike binge right now
The misspellings in the story description are not an effective draw.
5693497 I got to ask how would you change it
He different, He fetchuers
Him big swamp boss , Big MoJo !
Got a few typos
Nice job with this opening chapter
5693662 thanks bro
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Interesting story, I would like to read more of it.
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You may need to fix this part up with some periods.
Otherwise, i am interested in what happens next.