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Weavers of Dreams


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Another three poems, this time dedicated to the two ancient rulers of Equestria.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

First poem and I must say it is simply divine. You dived deep into Celestia's character, exploring all the highs and the lows that her majesty had to endure for eons. The struggle of immortality, the kindness towards her loving subjects and the wrath she feels towards her opponents were all present here and exposed in a glorious beauty shining brighter than the morning star itself. It is such a shame really that this magnificent work is a bit overlooked, but it truly deserves all the praise I can give it and then some. I simply love how you woven in every emotion, every tear and every fire hidden under the mask of the Solar Leader and exposed who Celestia truly is. This comment may not mean much, but if anybody asks me, i would say that this poem is simply marvelous :raritystarry:

While reading this I had a sneaky suspicion that I should find some music to go along with it. This went along perfectly and the story seemed to have followed the tempo nicely. I had a feeling, while reading this, that this is one of those great speeches a general speaks to his legions after a great battle has been won. The rain will wash away the remnants of the battlefield of yesterday as we celebrate the harmony and peace, for we have finally found home. It was beautifully and elegantly written and your style is very prominent, which I really like. It is nice to see that an author has his/her own voice, because without, we're nothing more than parrots simply mimicking the words and ideas we overheard without any substances to back it up. Yours is certainly the opposite and I do wish you excel because these two poems have truly shown me that you have a great talent. Keep it up :raritywink:

6204578 Your comment means a lot. Not only is it one of the more in depth comments we've ever received, but it is also the first we've received for Twin Thesis. We're so glad somebody sees what we're trying to do. Most people, it seems, aren't so interested in poetry, but we keep writing it anyway. If you've enjoyed this, maybe you'd like to check out our other ongoing project: Equestrian Warrior Hymns. Again, thank you for the comment.

This was an excellent work. It was a truly spectacular journey through both day and night and the closing song bears all of their combined might. It truly is a spectacle for everybody who reads it and I am truly glad that it exists. The ending was just as majestic as the previous two showing off the regal twins once more in their absolute light. They're kind, but not naive. Generous, but not to be taken for granted.Diplomatic, but also virtous warriors. Amazing work you guys!:raritystarry:

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