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Weavers of Dreams


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Simple poems about Celestia and Luna's warriors. Telling of their honor and loyalty through trials and tribulations.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

This was very good. Honestly, I pretty much love what I've seen here up to this point.

You, sir, have been masterful in your writing. you have created three unique poems that truly accent the distinct qualities of the multiple races. You should be given a medal!

Truly enjoyable. Never ever stop writing.

Holy crap that was amazing! You're simply brilliant; all three hymns were unique and actually made me visualise the grace and heroic attributes of the guards as well as the other details.

Amazing! Strategically speaking, the pegasi race is one of the mightiest scouts and an amazing aviation force to be reckon with. Their manipulation over the elements of weather granted them an ability to bring a storm wherever they want and just the fact that their wings are powerful enough to create a tornado is astounding. i can only imagine the shear force of their impact as they crash towards their enemies, striking at the strength of our strongest bombs.

Ah yes the majestic unicorn division is a mighty force to be reckoned with. Garnished with three subdivisions: offensive, defensive and healing, it was perfectly represented here in yet another epic poem of gigantic proportions. Not even the Nightmare forces can't hold a candle to majestic Equestrian militia and the unicorns help solidify it. Their magic is what keeps us safe in the fields of battle and protects us under great sieges. Spectacular work!

And coming from the ground, please welcome Equestria's strongest and mightiest warriors. They shall not yield the shinning shields of Equestrian power they represent all the strength and courage of the land. They are the shear power as their thundering hooves echo louder than any battle horns you have the Earth Ponies arise and make the enemy cover and hide. Yet another spectacle!

Hidden troops lie deep within the places where our enemies think they are the safest. Under the oak trees, beneath the blue seas and in the desert's heat they lie preparing to strike at all enemies of Harmony and Light. The shadows shall not cross their lands and darkness will not reign. Rejoice for our militia protects us strong. All hail the Equestrian warriors and may they protect us evermore! Yet another collection of masterfully crafted poems! Bravo! Encore!

6204883 Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. To each of you comments. You've been a great encouragement. :raritywink:

Is this done? I would like to know, because it's really good.

6617568 Not really, still trying to come up with some other military branches and ideas. Been busy with some other stuff as well. We'll get back to it sometime soon.

6618584 Okay, just wondering. This is a great story/myth/song(s) and I would hate for it to be dead.

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