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Sirius_Face


Just another struggling writer.

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This was the reason his eyes stayed on her rear, holding up her tail, watching Dash’s fingers rub circles over her slit as she laid across his lap, ideally masturbating.

Idly. Yeah, I know, it looks wrong, but it's the adverb form of "idle."

“Mac? It’s okay. You already owned me, way before things turned out like this.”

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You know, it's often said that any concept can work well if written well enough... and you just proved it. This is the first—and probably only—time I've ever up voted a Fallverse story, and it's because of the emotions. Despite the knowledge that nothing has changed, that the day after tomorrow, Dash will return to Hell, and indeed so will Mac, this moment, right here, is just for them. Just for love. Shows the strength of the human(equine?) spirit. It doesn't matter that the world will continue in its evil state, because for right now, they have each other. In fact, I kinda want to read more...
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What the hell have you done to me, Sirius?! You make me want more of... this! :flutterrage: In the end, a sad—and yet somehow hopeful—scene showing that even in the darkness, light can be found.

Oh, and because I have to...

Goddammit, Sirius... :rainbowwild:

5632902 You must have spent entirely too much time complaining about Fall that you've developed a mild interest. Perhaps your subconscious requested you complain just to make you interested in your waking mind for reals. Also known as becoming a Brony. XD

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This is all part of the plan. Soon you'll want harder material. Soon, you'll be one of us. :pinkiecrazy:

Thank you for your nice comments too! Glad you liked it.

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First I enjoy stories about love struggling in harsh environments... and then I'm wanting latex-covered mares squirting gallons?

Dear God, the Republicans were right!!

5632902 You might enjoy Bruised Apples too then, which this story seems to be based on. Though so far no romance in that one.

A nice story because it shows in this crapsack world there is a tiny bit of hope. I am suprised he didn't bring Applejack to see her friend for a bit though. That would have been nice as well. I am suprised he would have feelings for Rainbow Dash of all mares though. Thats an odd choice.

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There's a few implied reasons why Mac doesn't want anyone on the farm to see Dash. As to the reason for this ship, it was brought to me as a challenge.

The first time this was posted, I think I remember it said Big Mac was the only unaffected stallion. Did you change the description, or has it always said that and I'm simply going mental... Er? XD

I really liked it. The story of Mac, Applejack and their farm is my favorite in the FoE universe and this is a really cool addition to it. Thumbs up

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Maybe? I don't recall, but I did want to make it clear he's just one of a few.

I would say that I'm surprised that someone wrote a story based off mine :pinkiegasp:

But..... you already showed me this story ahead of time. Thanks for flattering me with this lovely tale. I really enjoyed reading it. :twilightblush:

THE LACK OF CLIT SNIPPING OFFENDS SLANNESH! THINGS WILL GET LOUD NOW!

Rise Above Hate

Is this going to be the only chapter of this story? Because it's a damn shame that this is the only one of such a good story.

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Thank you for saying so! But I'm afraid at the moment this is the only thing I have planned for this part of FoE. I don't know if I'll go back to this paring again in the future, but if I get an idea for them, I'll most likely explore it. At the moment I am working out an idea for a different FoE story.

Eh, Big Mac is such a buzzkill. Equestria is the best its ever been (the caribou actually know where females belong).

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You are as evil as those caribou scumbags.

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