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Hey look! First one! That means any comment will send chills up your spine! Wait a minute, I'm the commenter. Is this reality?
Anyway, I have to say that wasn't too bad. Maybe a little more build up would be better at the start, seems kind of rushed there.
Also, it seems like there was zero proofreading in this, which is fine since there weren't too many mistakes, but I just think that you wrote the story in one go without reading it. But other than that, nice job.
Also, I did like it so I will give you a 'thumbs up.' Heh, that's just funny.
5355329 I have to admit. I didn't prove read it at all. Thanks for the kind words, I've gone through it and fixed a few mistakes, I'll have to fix the rest at a later date as I have family here. May be a bit hard to explain this story to them.
5355338 Thanks, it's getting better ratings than my first try at a story. I had 12 dislikes and 11 likes, but this is doing much better.
Is that foalcon I sense?
5359081 Your senses are spot on, sir.
5359094
I'm SO reading!
5359098 Thanks. I hope you enjoy it.
5359098 What did ya think?
5359148
Shhhhh. I'm reading it now.
5359148
Well, I, uh, um...
I think I came a bit.
5359170 If you liked it that much, could you do me a favour and give it a thumbs up? I'm trying to reach 40 likes before I get 15 dislikes.
5359182
Of course.
I have an idea for a story, and it could be a little collab with us, if you want to do a collab, that is...
5359189 Private message me the idea and I'll take a look, but I'm not going to be doing any more stories until this one get's to 50 likes and I've finished the first Chapter to the sequel.
5359278 I was featured?!
5359286 IT STILL COUNTS!!!!
5359291 I love that movie.
5359301 People who haven't seen it.
5359304 What do ya think of mah fic?
5359342 Thanks for the honest review. I love you.
5359366 Does a 7/10 deserve a like?
5359382 Thanks. lol
Dun dun Dun Dun DUN DUN DUN DUN
THE VINYL IS HERE! no really i like read allllllll of the top story's and rate them this is in my list of clop area soo mmmmm it ok for your 1st time soo ill give 5 points for that then Scoots and rainbow idea i like it 2 more points and then i give it a like not me 1 point so out of everyhing i would give this a 8/10
:D
Hope to see another very soon
im still here?
Cant stop talking
i mean reading
ya readingggggggg
so Cya
5363470 Thanks for the review.
Needed to be hotter but I liked!!
I see what you did there with the skittles
Since its a rainbow PONEHS its like skittles cuz
FEEL THE RAINBOW
TASTE THE RAINBOW
I think thats how it went
Not bad. Not bad at all
https://youtu.be/EN4e0k90Noo
There needs to be a wdm/animation of this.