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The Young and Free Dragon


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Ever read the "how to publish a fic in FiMFiction.net" -blog post? They said that no prologue-only first publishments, if you want to give prologue first then give chapter 1 at the same time.

Ooooh, tracking! I loved that book; Let's see if you can do it justice!

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Oh c'mon man everypony does it leave him be would ya? :pinkiehappy: I can't wait to see where you go with this keep up the good work Oh AND FIRST REAL COMMENT!!!!!! :pinkiesad2: oh never mind DARN YOU INKARUS!!!!!

just gonna say, I loved the book "the mist" and it was one of my more favorite reads, so I'll be looking forward to reading this.

Can Fluttershy turn evil and kill all of her animals? That would be a good twist.

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first real comment?

NO PINKIE CAN'T BE TAKEN BY THE MIST!!!!! I FORBID IT!!!!!

Will this be based off the the short story or the movie? Cuz I haven't seen the movie but I've heard that it ends differently... very differently.

I hope that the rest of the story can live up to this (especially if you're gonna just ditch Pinkie like that before chpt 1 is even up TT^TT)

Before we go anywhere, the rating probably should bw mature.

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I believe he/she is referring to how they actually said something about the story, rather than worrying about something that has already been checked by moderation, and isn't that big of a deal in the first place.

Da buck? Pure coincidence? My fic is about the maisma being a fog and stuff... interesting

The Mist? Never read the book, but I watched the movie.

Can't say I'll ever forget that ending. Oh, irony at its purest.

Never Read The Book, But Saw The Movie. Ending Was Unexpected. I Hope This Is Better. :moustache:

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No. Just no. That will not happen. I will not let it happen.

I will be tracking this. I will be waiting for more chapters. And I will be waiting to see what happens to Fluttershy.

:pinkiegasp::fluttershbad::applecry::raritycry: YOU KILLDED DERPY!!!!! YOU AND APPLEJACK KILLDED DERPY!!!! :flutterrage::twilightangry2: YOU KNEW THE TENTACLE THING WAS IN THE IST AND THAT IT WOULD GET THE FRST ONE TRYING TO FIX THE GENERATOR BUT YOU STILL SENT HER OUT AND KILLED DERPY!!!!


:raritycry: Why must this story be so amazing that I could see Derpy as that thing killed her? :raritydespair: WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?! SAVE DERPY!! SAVE DERPY!!! *sniff* I just don't know what went wrong :derpyderp2: Cupcakes never prepared me for being Derpless

YES!!!!!!! FINALLY! A NEW CHAPTER! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

OMG DERPY!!!!!!!:fluttercry::pinkiegasp::rainbowderp::raritycry: WHY!? I remember watching this movie. I actually stopped watching at this part. :twilightblush: I really hope Fluttershy okay.:fluttershbad:

A fic that has sex...and has "The End is Neigh" Pinkie image....

I do not know whether to be disturbed, intriqued, or both.

You win a mustache before I've even read the fic.:moustache:

YOU'RE DAMN RIGHT IT DOESN'T BEGIN TO MAKE UP FOR THE LOSS OF DERPY.

I'd go for a make your own ending personally. I'll read along with you. You have us curious...

Awwwww, Trixie almost ended up as a good guy but you made her the crazy old lady who almost got everypony killed in the story. Oh well, nothin she isn't used to I guess.

I'm still mad about killing Derpy with the first friggin monster. I mean at least let her survive until your equivalent of the giant spider scene (if you include it)
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Otherwise great story

Dern it. You made the old hag even more untolerable now!

On another note, looking good!

Anypony else realise TYAFD spelt 'Chapter' wrong on chapter 2?

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Probably, but I guess none of them give a damn about a typo.

631850 If you're online, why aren't you POSTING MOAR CHATPERZ?

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Would you rather it be up tonight, or early tomorrow? (Depending on how fast my Beta is.)

632346 Well, it's 8:37 in the morning where I'm living, so, this evening?:duck:

So who was in the chariot I wonder...

ummmm.... what happened to the chariot's passenger? Man this story could really use a dose of Molestia and Lunaughty. A few scenes of them and the whole problem would be solved.

Love the new monster btw

I'm worried about reading this cause I think Twilight's going to kill Spike in the end... I don't want Spike to die... :fluttercry:

I find it fitting that Derpy is that dumb bag boy... I just watched the movie.

Wait a sec, she didn't think of him like that very often.... so AJ does think of her brother like that? :rainbowkiss:


This is good, but I woulda preferred AJ lived. Ah well. They must die in the end.

Damn, this shit's getting freaky!

Well I just lost my bet. I was thinking AJ would be the one to kill Trixie. Damn...
Okay now I'm betting on Twi.

798540 I agree, I would have preferd if Aj live as well, does it make me sick as buck to admit that I honestly like Applejack/Big Mac? I mean I did not have one problem with the clop in it, and I thought it was very well made....of course I'm an only child and I'm twenty years old but ANYWAY.......perfect job, Free, I'm hoping to see more...on a lot of different stories that you have written as well as this story itself....poor Derpy, I still miss her....damn.

NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO DERPY AND APPLEJACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :raritycry::raritydespair::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

So is this story over? Because I'm enjoying the hell out of it.

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Ha ha, I really hope not. I've been distracted though, and haven't been able to find my notes for the next chapter. I'd really like to continue it though, it's been a lot of fun to write.

*sees that I'm still the newest comment...*
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO IS REALLY ATTACHED TO THIS STORY!!!??? :flutterrage:
Anyways, I caught sight of this. "Please leave a comment or send me a message to tell me where you want the story to go. Read the beginning of the story, or my latest blog post to find out the details." So I'll put my two sense in... :derpytongue2:
First of all, you need to find Spike. I think you should have Twilight keep everyone calm and secretly plan with her friends to go find Spike. (Please do kill off as many as you please... But not Twi!) Then they could find him inside of a nearby store, Carousel Boutique perhaps? (Alive and unharmed preferably!) Now, while they're gone Trixie could have time to take over SCC and turn everyone against Twilight, as in the movie. However, I would recommend dragging out the search and rescue for a few chapters. This will not only give Trixie time, but will keep the readers on the edge of their seats as Twilight and her friends face newer, and more evil horrors.
Oh, and don't you dare ship Spike with Rarity!!!... But that's just my personal opinion...
Let me know if you want anymore ideas. :twilightblush:

I'll be disappointed if this story doesn't get continued, I really do enjoy it so far. Just about everything has been tastefully done (except, really, the clop scene. It was well-crafted but just seemed sorta shoved in there for absolutely no reason) and the characters, for the most part seem to accurately reflect the ones in the movie. That said, I don't really get the feeling that they're accurately reflecting the characters from MLP that they're supposed to, with the exception of Twilight and, sadly, Big Macintosh in his stoic silence (also: god damn if that wasn't comical when he did his 'longest nope ever' thing toward the end... I actually laughed at the mental image of that), so this is pretty strictly one of those crossovers that's literally just a reenactment by ponies. Not the best way to do crossovers, but still very entertaining. I say keep at it, really, it's a suspenseful story and, even though I feel like I know how it's going to end (being a fan of the movie and book) I still want to see the way you handle it, so don't let this trail off into nothingness! I know first hand how easy it is to let that happen :raritywink:

Ooooh fuck....

So trixie is the crazy religious old lady?
Damn it! Everypony is going to die! And I assure you I know who's going to die first.
*Looks at Cheerily*

I won't say any names though....

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