Second story and my first attempt at one-shot writing! These prompts are based off of the ideas I had suggested in the comments of Forced memories Forced mothers. Please tell me which of these one shots you would like to see become an actual story, and I will try to make those prompts into a full story. Or write a story about it yourself, after all every writer can bring a new look on the same topic! Please like if you enjoy these ideas and if not then that's perfectly fine! Please comment with your votes for the one-shots that will become stories if you would like to!
Various one-shots involving many different kinds of hypnosis with different characters.
Chapters (4)
Nice story, I found it interesting. Keep up the fantastic work!
Very interesting and I like it. But I can't say if this is the best yet, you'll probably do better on the others, and then I'll decide which one I like the most
Thank You!!! The next one-shot should be posted within then next 2 days my friends! Thank you both so much!
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So I'm also taking requests for which characters and plot points you would like to see in future one-shots. If you would care to make a suggestion then please comment or PM me!
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Mkay! If anything comes to mind I'll tell ya
No need to thank ME for YOUR greatness
No I Need to thank you! Both of you! You've both been really supportive, wonderful and helpful! Thank you both sooooo MUCH FOR EVERYTHING!!!!!!
Don't need to thank us. First of all, you told us to read your story and that we did, and if you like a story, you comment to it.
And we were already good friends of yours and what friends don't help each other? Plus you've helped me more than I did
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Still thanks a ton. Your requested Rarity and Spike story will be fourth btw.
Ok!
And within a week, all of Ponyville will be turned into book junkies just like Twilight.
A Shining and Chrysalis one. In it, the Chrysalis queen realizes that she does love Shining and is determined to get her hooves onto him, no matter what...even if it means rearranging ponies' minds to do so.
Here's another idea. A one-shot based on this: http://mistydash.deviantart.com/art/Obliviate-388760072
Twilight, using the spell without realizing what it's for, accidentally erased not only her own memories, but Celestia's and Luna's. And in the confusion, Twilight somehow use a teleportation, sending the three mares on a deserted island somewhere...and ends up giving themselves new memories, like Celestia and Luna now believe they are lovers with Twilight as their daughter.
So whatcha think?
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That's... A good idea! Both of them actually. My plan for a Twilight Chrysalis one came from the ask Queen Chrysalis tumblr. Ever since I read that I've become addicted to that ship... Your request for a Shining Chryslais one shot will be chapter 4 so just a few more to go and your story will be ready
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Thanks, though my first one was for Shining Chrysalis, not Twilight Chrysalis.
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I know the Twi Chrysalis one is one im writing by my own choice. The shining Chryslalis one is the one I said would be ready soon. Sorry about the confusion
Even for a one shot, this is really short. It's hard to get invested in the story if everything happens so fast.
Still, I'm looking forward to future one shots.
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These are actually more of prompts then one shots. My plan is for you all to vote on which ones you like most and then I'll adapt them into full stories later on. I also plan to create a little group competition where I pick my personal favorites and create a story contest for you all to participate in! If anyone is interested of course
I want more! But for this oneshot i think Twi should of set it up as close AS sisters cause peeps gonna question it
Dialogue is a bit stilted. You may want to work on making the characters' speech more natural.
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Okay thanks! Sorry its been so long ive been busy this holiday break
5345702 Well if these are more prompts then stories we are gonna need more then one. Maybe do a blog post and list the ideas?
Nice, but you could put in...2 to 3 commas: right after ''Now,'' after ''Scootaloo'', one after 0 and a period after tired. Still nice though.
that ok and i forgive you
I think you should change this to Hypnosis one shots instead of prompts. They are just to long and detailed to be one shots.
The argument was good, and was going very good, but the final is the problem, you hurry up and it's obvious that what could be the best part, go bad.
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Yeah I know...Im REALLY sorry! I was in a rush to get it out and well I guess I wasn't thinking...Im really sorry, i'll edit it soon, I promise!
5988543 Don't worry, just do when you can, if you hurry you could have it very bad.
Not a bad story at all but the whole time I was reading it I couldn't help but wonder why Trixie was talking like Iron Will?
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I can't believe I forgot that, from what I remember Trixie was always talking in the first person...It HAD been a while since I'd seen Boast Busters or Magic Duel, and I didn't have access to Netflix at the time....Once I get done with some other stuff, I'll come back and edit these chapters, ALL of them.
Ah...
Uhm... how is Twilight a princess in this if she is still a unicorn?
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I really need to edit this again...sorry for the typo, this was back in my really early days...I'll try to get it patched asap.
This one shot is one that I'd actually like to see some kind of sequel to.
And one of two things should happen in it:
1. The others would somehow find out about what AJ's doing, and they decide to not only rescue RD from her, but also to punish her by turning her into RD's slave for a while. The only difference is that AJ's body would do what it's told, but her mind would still be free, so it would be torture for her.
2. Something causes RD to snap out of AJ's control, and she decides to get revenge somehow.
Given the way this ends, the first would be more likely, but the second is the one I'd personally like to see more, since Rainbow is my favorite member of the mane 6, and my favorite character overall from the first 3 seasons.
6507171the sequal show also have someone ask rainbow to beat her to death with a golf club as reference to bioshock which is the whole basis of this chapter.
through out game a man asks you to perform the various in game objectives asking "would you kindly?" the main trigger used for sleeper agents in the game
6543390 Interesting.
I've never played Bioshock, so I didn't know that.
Now that I think about it, this one-shot also needs a sequel.
One where RD notices the changes in Scootaloo's demeanor, and confronts Twilight about it.
A pony chooses, a slave obeys.
I get that reference. Now where's my monkey wrench?
Not sure if you still want it the part of "Tell what one-shots do you like as a story" but I liked the first two.
I assume you have abandoned this by now but if you have not I think you should make stories based off the 1st prompt with Scootaloo and Twilight as well as this one, they both have me interested, the first one for how everyone would react and what led Twilight to do that and this one to see how Trixie executes the rest of her plan and the fallout of it all
This won’t end well wonder what will happen
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it was before tirk destroyed the tree
but the description and the author are confused about it.
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the translator messed up a little
so celestia and luna think they're lovers, and twilight and his daughter
or do you both think twinlight and your daughter and your lovers at the same time?
oh and the image has been deleted
well i liked the idea and everything
but wouldn't it be easier (and moral) for twilight if she wanted scotaloo to have had a famailia, just adopt it?
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I mean Celestia and Luna think they are lovers AKA in love with each other, and Twilight is their daughter.
As for the image, I was able to save it on my computer a long time ago, but I don't think I could paste it here.
I've got a love hate relationship with this installment.
I love it because the mind control and the way the final breaking is shown is really well done here, to the point that I find myself coming back to this occasionally despite the hate part.
I hate it because of how thoroughly erased Dash's personality ends up being. Still hope it gets a sequel where the tables get turned, even if it's unlikely
PLEASE make the last one a full story, I really wanna see Trixie warp the other elements of harmony and eventually the princesses as well.