Tonight, I feel like destroying something beautiful.
Those were the last words spoken to me by my faithful student.
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This is awful.
I'm confused about the end. Did Twilight kill herself, or use magic to give up immortality, or what. I get the statue though.
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I'm guessing she broke the element of magic(hence the statue holding crown broken in half) which took away her immortality/caused her to die in some way.
That's what I'm getting from it at any rate.
Why is Discord listed as a character?
I loved it, but the ending seemed illogical. After all, you didn't clarify if Twilight's sacrifice actually saved anypony. If you would rectify this issue, then I'm fairly sure a flood of sequels about Equestria coping with the loss of the Elements would follow. It's very well written, save for a few errors.
Applejack is dead, so she doesn't think anything.
Fluttershy is also dead.
Dead, but that won't stop her from liking this story.
Rainbow Dash is confused, since she just went to Cloudsdale for a week and then BAM everyone thinks she's dead.
Rarity is horrified. All these awful maggots are just ruining her mane!
Twilight didn't realize that Rainbow wasn't dead.
Apple Bloom is sad that Applejack is dead. Even though she's been dead for a while.
Sweetie Belle cannot talk, but looks very confused.
Spike is presumed dead and mustache-tastic.
Celestia killed them all in the first place.
Now, for PONE ratings:
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I cried this was great many feels were felt
The ultimate curse, to outlive your friends. Especially when you are where you are because of them. The question though is did she do the right thing?
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You caught me. He was in the original draft but not in the final product, whoops.
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Here lies twilight sparkle
I failed my element and don't deserve my title, why do i get a memorial?
Element of Magic/Wonder, friends leave your life it's part of friendship, always looking to the world as a magical and wonderful place is twilight's element's point, and losing friends means opportunities for new ones.
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Congratulations. This story has actually.made me cry. The second story ever to do that. Crying is manly i don't care what anyone says.
Why did I read this?! I knew just from the title that I would be sobbing by the end, but I still put myself through it! Well done you bastard! Well done on making such an amazing and heart-wrenching story.
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This is still awful.
>Smart Food
You seriously used that name?
Holy shit, how drunk were you when you wrote this?
You're a stupid mother fucker.
I love you.
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I love you too.
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