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865194 Exactly. This fic is weird, a bit rushed at the end, still a piece of gold. The followup though, Red Tears and Razor Blades, promises to be great:3

i liked the story at the beginning it had a lot of potential. i read the whole story and i like the beginning but i feel that it could have been made different. its just my option but at the first few chapters it can be made into a very good emotional story may be you can remake it but that's your choice

*after looking at desc.*Hmmm this story looks rater interesting....
*looks at cover image* Never mind!
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you had SUCH a good story going then suddenly everypony just bucking dies? That was very disappointing, especially because it was all so good.

NO U BETTER MAKE A SEQUEL CAUSE I WILL NOT LET YOU FINISH THE STORY LIKE THIS!!!!

You are an amazing writer but why :fluttershbad:

You tagged sex in the story. You might want to get rid of that tag sense there wasn't any.

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