The Chronicles of Ponyville high school: Razor's story

by Broneyofnoel

Ch. 3a Too Short

Sweetie Belle and Coach Bar, as Sweetie Belle learned his name to be, rushed Razor to the hospital. Coach Bar had been able to stop the bleeding, but he feared the wounds may also be internal, but only the doctors could be sure. Coach Bar was much faster than Sweetie Belle, and he had much ore endurance, so Sweetie Belle faltered and fell about halfway there.

"Go coach, I'll catch up!" Sweetie called, gasping for air.

Coach nodded, and ran even faster, the doctor was only a half mile away now, Coach could surely make it. Sweetie Belle started a b risk tro, which was al she could muster, she was not the best athlete either, but she joined a sport...because of a boy, oh Rarity is either going to love her or hate her for it.

After about five minutes of brisk trotting, Sweetie Belle could see the clinic, she started sprinting.

"I'm coming! I'm coming!" she yelled as she ran.

Sweetie Belle burst through the doors of the clinic, she could hear the doctors rushing to aid Razor, she followed the noises. She went into one of the check-up rooms, she saw the two doctors, a mare and a stallion, trying to bring Razor back to consciousness.

"Who're you?" the doctor said, turning his head from Razor.

"I'm Razor's friend...I helped get him over here..." Sweetie Belle said coldly.

The mare walked over to Sweetie Belle, and hugged her. Then the nurse went back to Razor.

Sweetie Belle was in disbelief, the nice young colt...well her age, that she had just befriended today, was now fighting for his life in the Ponyville Clinic, what if she hadn't befriended him, would he still be normal? She closed her eyes and fell into a dreamless sleep.

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Razor opened his eyes slightly, he was in a world of pain, he looked around...he was moving, but he wasn't moving himself, he felt a magic aura around him, he was being levitated by.... Coach Bar. He had a look that was mix of panic and urgency on his face, Razor turned to look where they were going...it was the Ponyville clinic, the clinic where his parents worked...Son of a bi..

""Go coach, I'll catch up!" he heard somepony say...Sweetie Belle?

Sweetie Belle, she seemed like the most beautiful thing to him now, he felt so bad that she had to find him, couldn't it have been somepony else?

Razor faded back into unconsciousness as the coach carried him into the clinic, the last thing he saw was the ceiling.

And then back again into consciousness

'I'm awake...' he thought, but couldn't say aloud...something was blocking his mouth, the image in front of him clarified, it was Sweetie Belle, she was kissing him...on the lips...he relaxed.

"He's awake!" Sweetie belle shouted after she noticed his open.

His parents rushed back to him, they faded, as did his vision.

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Sweetie Belle woke up to the sounds of medical machines beeping, she rushed into the room, she didn't know why...but seeing him alive made her feel amazing, she leaned forward to kiss him. Their lips made contact, the feeling shook Sweetie Belle, it was if a thousand fireworks exploded, if an earthquake lasted for only a second, it was an instantaneous reaction, after about five seconds, she noticed his eyes opened.

"He's awake!" she shouted, his parents rushed to him.

Razor faded back into consciousness, and the machines sounded faster.

"He's going critical!" his mother shouted, trying to slow his breathing and heartbeat/

The room went silent for one second, then a horrible sound...

Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppp

"Razor?" Sweetie Belle questioned.

Razor was dead.

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BOOM romantic kiss, and Razor died, well, that was a fun alternate ending!

Comments

[-Brutus]

Boom alt ending (lets see if people do notice that little last line)

[Broneyofnoel]

509311

It's my little develish scheme

[SketchyStart]

What the heck did I just read?

[AccessDeniedLULZ]

DAMN THAT WAS SCARY
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