When a young pony's mind is plagued by dark thoughts, will she take the leap of faith, ultimately ending the darkness dwelling inside of her?
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P0nies
Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!
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It's a mistake a lot of ponies make. It is a single pony so pony's
498276 What are you talking about?
badass
but is this the end
fuuuuuuuuuu
498287
The description. He's right, too.
(A young ponies mind. Ponies is plural. Fluttershy is one pony. We're trying to show possession here, and it's one pony, so it should be pony's)
498287 Sorry, i typed that response way to quickley.
"When a young ponies mind" ponies is plural, as in, more than one pony. The correct way to write that would be. "When a young pony's mind."
498356
Lol, you're welcome.
You know how to indednt and space paragraphs. For the love of Celestia thank you. There is somepony else that knows how to indent.
this was good....sorta thought it was something else when i saw SUICIDAL TENDANCIES.
was thinking the awsome band but this is still good.
498276 Fixed the description, thanks.
498394 I take it you hate it too when people don't indent?
499106 WHAR IS NEW PARAGRPH BEGINZ?????
yes, i do hate it.
Very nice indeed. I quite liked the vague ending, as well.
539311 You might want to see a vauger ending - Wingless
539673
/IfOnlyThereWasARainbowSaluteEmoticonButOhWellThis'llDoForNow
Yessir, soon as I can. I'll let you know when it's done.
539673
It's quite good, and the ending was about as vague as this(in my opinion). Thank you for introducing it to me.
Another beautiful little story. I am not a personal fan of the vague ending because it cuts off my mental picture of the scene and now it is all "WTF happened"!? Great story though. Keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading more from you. (I will though, I have half or more of your stories in the "read later" category)
awesome
Dat cliffhanger tho
The feels!
10/10
my god...THE FEELS!!!!!!
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The end is in your eyes, what happens after the words have ended. It is unto your own mind's creativity to who lives, who doesn't, or if any of them did at all.