On a dark midnight in the middle of the Everfree forest Zecora stumbles upon an injured pony. Join this pony as he tries to regain his memories from a shrouded past.
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God I can't wait for the next chapters
You finally decided to start to post this story here
. I have read it in the fanfiction site, and now it's basically one of the reason I check the site regularily. Just don't post all of the 28 chapters at one go 
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Don't worry about it, I will be posting them pretty slowly, just to keep everyone in suspense
This is starting to get good, can't wate what happens next
Ugh! Why is this one not caught up with the one of FanFiction!
Still, great story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's funny to look back at the earlier chapters to how you are writing now. A lot of improvement has occured.
Cliffhanger?! Damn you XD
Good chapter, it reveals little more about him.
Plot is moving pretty well, keep up the good work!
What does that letter say hmm, probably Luna after instant realization hit her haha.
i just found this and like it
Now i fire of my theory that his Mother is Luna.
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go to this link. its from the guy who makes this fan fic. its currently at 32 chapters if you wish to get ahead
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7745733/32/Out_of_the_Darkness
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yeah i already found that and know that i was wrong -.- ah well close enough
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Awww, come on that's just ruining it for everybody!
:D Just kidding, it doesn't matter either way, but thanks for actually reading this story.
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of course im going to read the story. its very good. cant wait for chapter 33. its going to be brilliant. i have a feeling your going to try and bring destruction back. am i right?
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It could happen, or something even more incredibly unknown could happen, but who knows, my mind is a maze of ideas and I barely ever grasp them.
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im assuiming you are the orignal author and your just posting it on here. so with that said.....im going to murder you for getting my hopes up with your april fools post. i was looking forward to reading about discords creation and such. thank you very bloody much. also keep up the good work.
oh and before i forget. could you please (if you dont mind and have time) proof read and possibly correcct mistakes and edit my story please. i only need the second chapter looking at. thanks if you do, thanks for readin if you dont
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Sure, I would need to see the story first, so if you have already published it then tell me your other account name because the one you are on doesn't have it published, if it isn't published PM me it or something.
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i have it published but i dont thikn its been verified or whatever yet as i got an email saying it had too many categories or something.so heres the link
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17732/1/Strange-New-World/Chapter-1
only the first chapter is out. but once youve read that let me know and give me your email so i an send you the second. its in a word document with the first chapter aswell. the second chapter is copy pasted from the site as i wrote it in ollege and saved the copy into word.
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Nothing I really found wrong with the first chapter that wasn't already stated, go ahead and send the second chapter to taz2723@hotmail.com
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just sent it. i tried structuring my sentances differently. and tried making it so each dialog got a new paragraph.
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Do you just want me to change grammatical errors or help completely revamp the chapter?
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would be nice if ou could help with grammatical and spelling and capitalising but i wouldnt mind if you edited the story any way or added bits in. just where you change change the colour but dont delete original just italic it so i can see where you changed. i want another authors take on my story so if i an see what you put (if you want to change anything that is) then i might get a better idea of what to put. i have a good base line to the story but when it comes to filling it in im clueless. but im getting better slowly.
I like the story, the plot is appealing, predictable, but appealing. That said, the writing detracts from what could otherwise be a great story. There aren't all that many actual mistakes, its just that the style seems a bit immature, a bit unrealistic as far as dialogue goes and a bit choppy, but then again, I'm not an English major, so take that with a grain of salt.
Alright! What was in those cupcakes? Confess or I'm reporting you to the FDA!
Your house is surrounded! Just give up the contraband and nopony gets hurt!
In reference to my earlier comment; Your writing is much better, still a touch choppy, but better in every way. kudos.
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Haha, you'll never catch me! I will never tell you that it is just regular chocolate cupcakes with vanilla pudding, never! Oh wait....
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Thanks, I should probably edit the chapters more, seeing as I have gotten better since I first started to write the story, I am at about chapter 33 by now but I still haven't edited my earlier chapters to be better.... Oh well, I guess I will just have to update to this site faster then.
407051 good luck, we're all counting on you.
Open up! This is the Pie Secret Service! If you do not open up in 10 seconds we will send in our one man breaching team!
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I don't fear guns! Bring it on!
DAMNIT I'm out of chapters to read from this fic!
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And then suddenly I posted a bunch more.
WHAT A TWIST!
WOW I NEVER EXPECTED THAT!
FLASHBACK...I think
I like!
Eventually, he will return to Ponyville and become the Star, formerly known as Prince.
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That was funny, though I don't think Star could even hit the lowest note that Prince could.
Huh, I expected Luna to be his mom, shows what I know. Rarely, do stories get the drop on me like that, well done sirrah.
427007 I see what you did there.
SOOO she is bring Applejack and was that awkward situation earlier because some of them are in love?
OH BUT DAMNIT I HAVE TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW TO LEAVE
NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS
Want MOAR!!!!!!!! Back on topic, I was laughing after Celestia told Star about 'things'. That must have been the definition of awkward.
I have a quick question for you.
Will Zecora be coming back? I mean, I love the story, but it seems that every time Zecora appears in a fic, she is used and discarded after her job is done.
Also, when Celestia and Star had the "talk," I ROFL'd... hard!
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I plan on Zecora being in the fic again, don't worry about that, I would feel bad about just using a character that was once important then immediately discarding them without purpose.
This is starting to turn into a soap opera. First Star learns his father is Starswirl. Then he learns that his mother is Celestia and that he's a prince on top of that. And now he's discovered a long lost brother. Next thing you know, he'll be pregnant.
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You know it's funny... I almost put that into the April Fools chapter... and don't worry, more shocking twists await around the corner.