“ARRRGH!” A enormous blast of magical energy smashed directly into the sun, sending it spinning. A second one followed almost immediately after, followed by another. Each one contained enough power to raze Canterlot to the ground, and each one was quickly growing in strength.
“HURTS!” She shouted, tears streaming down her eyes in pain. Her pain was strong. It was overwhelming. She couldn’t expend it fast enough, the pain grew stronger. It was as if the world was tearing her apart, starting with her skin, and she was being ground into a thousand flaky pieces.
Unable to explode the sun, Sweetie instead began to try and push it together. Her mind instantly clearing, she focused entirely on her task. Slowly, the sun began to shrink, and it required more and more of her magic to continue. Soon enough, Sweetie had no need to levitate the earth, or even the moon.
She continued.
2
Reet axat vo, laxamfrick en, dit’s timo te ke. Pum waxachow tee vust timo oxpraxainick zis te semothick Pum’v praxacick pit cedo en. Zis cedo dis se axadvaxancow jet ovon vupp erd blioct zo Staxackorick Plinco ceurd claxang. At roaxach, who ceurdn’t claxang feth cedos.
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Both, eh? I'm curious now. Or is this the second?
Also, talk about fusion. New universe?
So this is going to end with a black hole? I must be psychic!
Seriously, whats with the new chapters, that are barely even a chapter?
6176331
Sssshhhhh...
He's doing dramatic build up through chapters...
If she died in this loop, the way she did must have been epic.
~Leonzilla
6176740 Actually I'm kind of with 6176331 on this one. Yeah, writing the planned out chapters is a herculean feat. Especially if one was to do so while keeping it at a 1000 word minimum [the amount needed to submit a fic]. But these have been starting to become super small. They barely are a synopsis / over view of a loop. With some seeming to need to be a loop #.X rather than an entire loop.
It kinda takes away from dramatic build up between chapters when the chapters are minuscule.
Brain cannot compute what is even happening anymore
Chaxalswilr. Chep bengin laxamfrick axafuk furrskit. Proaxaso oithol skut zo whorr an, el chep dessossick Swootio Forro pi kivick whol pit whoaxadaxasto. Pum wirr bict ug, pi girr ug, dib ug peniz. Focaxauso je eno kivos pit bung dib ug waxank te fo dimmeltaxar, vaxato.
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