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Rarity opens the door to Sweetie Belle's room. There is a skeleton.
"It's not Nightmare Night," she scolds her sister.
Sweetie poofs back to her normal self, and pouts. "You never let me have any fun."
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I hate this holiday so much.
5808913 It's my favorite holiday.
~Leonzilla
I saw the chapter title, paused, then thought about the date. I smiled and advanced forwards to get a nice little chuckle. It's not like you don't update at a sufficient frequency to please most readers. I look forward to the next chapter.
5808913 now i need a prank and im out of ideas
Hey Author, I think 5808913 has a bone to pick with you. Let's just hope you don't have any skeletons in your closet. Who knows, we might find you skulling around or something. At least it ain't Hallows 5808985 stuff right? Oh wait...
(sigh) About what I saw coming
*sheds a single manly tear*
Beautiful. Your greatest work yet. A perfect ending to an honestly fantastic fic.
It's such a shame tha she never made it out...
She's been looping for almost 7 million years...
Then after her seven millionth and first year for being the oldest being on Equus, other than Dissy. She ascends to become a golden, crumple horned Snorkack.
My eyes almost fell out of my head when I saw the title of this chapter, but then I remembered it was april fools day, lol.
6.7 million years of looping?
Damn.
I didn't figure out this was a joke until I read the author note.
You know, last year I didn't even know it was April fools and thought everyone was seriously going crazy until I asked about it and was told. At least this year I remembered...
heh nice.
That was perfect.
Wow. That was beautiful. Just... wow. I'm speechless. Heh.
5811872 Already done
5809826 Yes! GOOOO LUNA!
(no, I'm not talking about the Princess. Go read some Harry Potter!)
5812280
Honestly I think if Luna Lovegood ever accidentally makes a portal to FimVerse Luna and Luna would make an awesome team ... although if it's like the EqG portal, I wonder what she'd look like as a pony?
Wow.
Sweetie Belle is like thousands upon thousands upon thousands of years old...
And that's all she does?
This really highlights my point about "progress." You could easily slip this chapter into any order in your story, and sadly nobody would question it. You're no longer writing a story. You're just showing us scribbles, because that's all you're able to create in such a short period of time.
This quantity over quality thing is really... bad. Honestly, I'll linger around for three or four more chapters.
Then I'll probably drop this fic. It's just not my style. This ain't a time travel story. It's more like a sand box to practice writing things.
ps - Sorry. Me just being grouchy. *sigh*
pps - I'm mostly staying, because I like chatting/messaging the Author. But even I have limits.
5812946 That's fair enough. I'll send you a message when loop 100 is out so you can see the conclusion.
Genius! So simple but so good. Best chapter ever!
10/10 would spooky again. Such spooky, many Skeleton, all the remix. 10 internet points if you get this.
5812975
Sorry. Um. I'm not a fan of just... conclusions.
I like progression. I like character development. I like growing and meaningful character relations and interactions. I like the moral dilemmas brought upon through time loops. I like the genuine advantages brought upon time loops. I like ... I adore long stories.
This isn't a long story. Rather, it's a long... something.
I appreciate the heart you put into this. But I'm not a huge fan of slice of life. Especially, when I think it's done in such a rushed way.
Remember, I'm just one reader. You seem to have lots of other readers that like your writing style and your humor.
Do not change, because at least you're making a certain niche happy with your writing. Take care, Warewolves.
*jumps off boat*
5813013 Asking me to change my writing style is like asking a snail to fly. I simply can't do that. I wish you the best of luck in life reguardless.
5813058
Honestly, I miss your old writing style...
You've changed. And I think it's because you're speedily shoving short standalone chapters that don't allow your writing style to fully bloom.
The story started very strong. You wrote that. And it was fantastic. It made me want more, and it kept me waiting 70 loops long. Be proud. You were a very effective writer.
I won't ever dislike A Little Loopy. But it won't be in my favorites. It'll definitely hold a special place in my heart. Take care, warewolves.
5813075 Uh, the same way anyone can listen to the shit about women and bitches twerking, riding someone's dick or in someone's car, etc. Just, you know, instead of about chicks with tig ol bitties, it's about guys that can flop their flaccid meat swords around like they're trying to dislodge a foul tempered cat.
Also, most people use their ears. Some use headphones or earbuds, and others use speakers, but most use their ears.
Aww, skeletons are the best!
5813120 Take care
5813004 2 spoopy
I found out about this story through my editors listing and I have to say it's an interesting aspect and I like it so far. Gonna keep reading this.
5826473 Oh? Where?
5827372 If you got to one of your editors ( 0_0 ) page then you'll see on the right hand side he has a couple different list.
5827621 Oh! I see
Damn it I just caught up to where it is now after 3 days and now I have to wait. On another note I love this story so far, I see why it's so highly appraised.
5833991 Thank you.
Two words. "Update Soon!" Or else I shall be forced to give pinkie pie two pots of coffee and a case of red bull, and a Giant Robot and send her your way"
5836579 http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/463954/taking-a-break-from-loopy
Is the skeleton spooky or scary in any way? If so, damn you.
5845841 So is everyone who loves those retarded songs about girls twerking and shit. This is the same as that, but with guys doing the helicopter rather then the landing pad.
I just realized something, the next chapter is going to be the 100th chapter!
this calls for a PARTY!
5874669 I've read your comments, and you raise some fair points.
5874416
Good sir, I belive you should go look up "Welcome to Nightvale." On Google. Now.
(You can use Bing, Yahoo, or Duck Duck Go search engines too, I guess.
5874655 AT last in hunger games , they explain how the beat supose to sound and in say harry potty the authr just sated that each poersn sings it thier own way so yeah doest work very often
5874669 i'm sorry, you lost me there, are you saying evolution doesn't happen in Equestria or are you saying that some other form of transformation-similar to evolution but not quite, happens due a different DNA or a magical DNA or no DNA at alll and instead some other form of "code" for life?
5883786 You bring up a good point. There's a few things that Sweetie Belle has NOT quite picked up about this loop she's caught in. The Conditions that brought the loop about are different from Starswirl's.
a) Sweetie's Death does not break the chain, or rather, it may be there's a very specific death that needs to happen.
b) There's someone else interfering, using Sweetie Belle as his puppet, and I don't think it's for her benefit. He may be grooming her to achieve something for his own benefit and she'll be the one to suffer for it.
c) While we can't say for sure, Starswirl brought his own loop on himself through his greed. I'm not sure what happened with Sweetie Belle, but due to point b, she has an option Starswirl didn't, at least from what we know.
So yeah, she can either grow powerful enough to face whoever is using her... and this is looking more and more likely as she may just follow in Twilight's hooves and ascend to Alicornhood, or.. I don't know what her other option is, but outright tricking the being? Possible.
5954276
:D 100% accurate statement.
5810288
There is no one art form, darling.
5991227 I was talking about the effects of the first one...
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5991880
The bartender could be in on it and slipped her a drugged drink, it's not like she was really watching what he was doing.
Commence read.
Liking the shenanigans.