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Hekkar


Brony, Gamer, Roleplayer. I am also a Jackal who is skilled in Alchemy, Black Magic, Voodoo Powers, and Necromancy :3

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Tartarus. Normally referred to as 'the prison with the really bad beings' or 'Cerberus's home'. What these ponies don't know is that deep within Tartarus sits a kingdom ruled by a male alicorn that lives as a 'Ruler of the Damned' as titles go. This alicorn was a stallion who kept eyes over the prisoners and of course of all evil itself within his walls. Every now and then, the ruler of the kingdom would come out, inspect the prisons and so forth, hell even speak with the prisoners.

The ruler of this kingdom is known as Prince Infernum, the son of Helvette, otherwise known as 'The Immortal Judge'. The problem was Helvette may of been known as Immortal, but even that came to an end when he vanished, leaving only a note of him 'dancing with eternal flames now'. As time went on, Prince Infernum has acquired many names from his power and kingdom such as 'Wielder of the Black Flame' 'Son of The Immortal Judge' 'Ruler of The Damned' 'The Eternal Jailer'

Unfortunately, the latest escape of Tirek didn't go unnoticed as he had to deal with the problems to arise. One such problem is the constant checkup letters sent to the princesses of the wards and prisoners. All of it was slowly going into routine that Infernum got used to.... that was until two of his residents went to check up on the prisoners and encountered six mares who had entered Tartarus to do a personal checkup on Tirek and a mistake had occurred.

What fallout will come of this? Will a long hidden secret be unfurled that the Princesses kept? Will their mere appearance cause problems in the future? Only time will tell.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 33 )

This seems like an interesting story.

OOOH I like where this is going :pinkiesmile:
Please continue

5204596 I can only promise to try :)

5201696 Hope so, I've been getting many weird ideas

Thou has are interest we like we're thee are going with this I hope thou makes this over 100,000 words as we have been finding less really good stories that go over 50,000

5207717 Okay two things pal

1) No promises on word count

2) Stop speaking Old English. I can hardly understand that language as it is.... it makes my brain hurt.

5207757 sorry I learned how to speak write and read old english by studing it for 5 hours straight it kinda got stuck

This chapter was very entertaining.

5255379 Indeed it was I can only wonder what there reaction to a another alicorn will be.

5256941 Trust me, questions will rise.

Also for everyone reading the comments, be prepared for at least three court trials in later chapters

HHMMMM,
This is my Guess for the Guilty parties. (Use if you want!)

Punishments:
Discord is sealed is a Child-like state with limited chaos magic a week, until the Harmony/Chaos balance is 55%/45%

Celestia (gets off easy somewhat) is forbidden to act on any of the 7 sins and must step down from authority in all of Equestria until Discord has completed his punishment; Raising of the sun is still her natural duty and must be done.

Luna must take over ALL of Celestia's royal duties and can only be assisted by (up to 3) royal advisers and/or a fellow kingdom ruler, until Discord has completed his punishment.

Blueblood is to be Silenced though all means, is to be disowned and must physically work 10,000 hrs community service without ever touching a mare. Once 10,000 hrs service is completed Communication will be restored.

5499191 Honestly.... I like these, though Celestia is not going to get off easy since she did break The Order three times and Luna only did it twice.... although she did try to take over Equestria... still working on those.

5499557 Think of Celestia's punishment like this, she can't SIN one of the sins is gluttony so that means she can't eat cake. That alone is torture to her then run though all the other sins............ It wont seem like much at the beginning but when you go though her 'habits' you find a fate more painful than real pain.

I'm glad to see that this story is back. I really like the confrontation with Infernum. I hope to see the next chapter soon to see the punishment.

Another great chapter, but you might want to check out how many "thee"s you have in the ye old speech part. Great chapter otherwise. ( Try swapping a few "thy"s into that)

5501927 yeah, skills with old English and knowledge of its vocab is quite lacking

cannot wait until the next chapter good job keep it up:twilightsmile:

Okay having some problems with the cover art thing. Seems to not want to work for whatever reason

Please more, more, more i can't WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
*got shot with a tranqullizer*
"Goddammit Pinkie i told you to not mess with my stuff and now the corner for you tonight"
sorry...again:fluttercry::fluttercry: (she went to the corner and fell asleep)
"I really hate when she breaks the 4th wall but that's Pinkie, anyway cant wait for the next page i love this to continue."

OMG what a freaking cliff hanger!
P.s. If Faust transcended into god (probably) does that mean that Helvette transcended to Satan?

6491221 That be spoiling it, but good does need evil right? Also I know I haven't updated anything in a long time and the reason is simple: college.

Freaking amazing story please update soon.

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