Brony, Gamer, Roleplayer. I am also a Jackal who is skilled in Alchemy, Black Magic, Voodoo Powers, and Necromancy :3
The Author. A being of only three real powers. Recording, Telling, and Immortality. A immortal being that never changes form, yet still changes minds of those around him. The Author is a being that has been around since time started and has since recorded stories on everything from the time God started the world up to the very last second.
This is his story, a story he wrote down of his own personal life and the mare who made him feel... different.
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Not bad.
I really liked this. You explored an interesting concept and I can see you worked hard to figure out how to tell this story. Good job.
Small problem with dialogue spacing, but otherwise, a good story.
5134313 Yes that always seems to be my problem :/
5133912 Yep, can you believe I originally planned a story of a human who lives in Ponyville and avoids traps set by the mane 6?
5134551 No worries, just remember that when a different character speaks they need new a paragraph. Even still, the way this is written allows me to forgive that blunder, it's even and it flows.
This is an interesting and somber story with deceptive simplicity. Thank you for helping me get rid of a sense of general malease that has been plaguing me.
5807900 Somber? Huh, never got that vib. Also I am please to help free you of your general malease