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Lunar Deviant


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I really like that hook. I'll swing by after work to read your story proper.

I shall give you a like and track this. The changeling romance premise is one I enjoy and it is wonderful to see an OC helping a character through possible emotional baggage.

Well written changeling premise here. I'll track this like a hawk. :twilightsmile:

An odd choice for his dead wife

My interest is piqued. I will follow this.

“The changelings that attacked Canterlot all had green middle and eyes, your middle is black and your eyes are white, why?”

They were blue, not green. Dark blue backs (I wouldn't call it "middle" as it doesn't go all around the barrel like on Chrysalis), teal wings and bright blue eyes.

5131822 Thank you for the correction, I'm partially colorblind, so I made a best guess. and good point on the description. I appreciate it and will fix that passage.

5131407 Ill expound on it in later chapters

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Tip: If you're unsure, use a software providing a color picker tool and infer the color from the RGB values. At least Firefox has one integrated.

By the way, Chrysalis did have a green theme and not a blue one.

Welp, I'm going to follow this: it seems well-written and changelings are groovy, so I see no reason why not. Although I was expecting the changeling to be male for some reason, that would've made things more awkward and interesting.

Huh, I went into this expecting M/M. Celestia save me...

Comment posted by HotWetLucario deleted Oct 13th, 2014

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You're not the only one.

5132326 Huh, what'd I say? Oh well.

Interesting. Tracking to see where you take this.

As somepony else mentioned I was honestly expecting the changeling to be male in its normal form. Still an enjoyable tale though. Faving and following to see where this goes; I'm a sucker for both Big Mac and clop stories that include an actual plot (hur hur) and feels.

Keep it going! I like the web you'be spun here. I'm thinking scootaloo either died tragically or ran off with another stallion but I want to see where this is going.

“We gain those colors as servants of Queen Chrysalis. I have no color because I have no hive.”

So evidently changelings follow Zerg coloring logic. Cool.

What I had done to the stallion finally caught up to me. I felt sticky, I felt ashamed; I felt fed, but in the worst way.

Yeah, out of all the ways to ruin a blowjob, doing it while wearing the face of a (presumably) dead lover surely ranks among the worst.

You get an upvote for constructing a situation in which breaking into somepony's home and going down on them is a viable crime.
I hope there's more chapters to come. There are so many awesome directions this could go.

... Really though, Scootaloo? How the heck did THAT happen? :applejackconfused:

5132326 Truth be told I'm not a fan of M/M stories, so that means I can enjoy, or at least try to enjoy, this fic.

So, is this story dead or what??:applejackunsure:

This better not be dead, this needs to live on.
So gud.

Edit; oh last comment before me was in 2015, yeah I'd say unfortunately it's dead... damn shame.

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