The sirens, three beings of great power that were banished from Equestria for their actions. Now trapped in a strange new world, they are forced to adjust, and get along. The history of the Adagio, Sonata, and Aria will finally be revealed!
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Looks like an interesting story...
Just one thing, and I'm being honest, not hurtful.
Please get a proofreader or something ok?
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Don't be sorry. I'll go back and fix the errors as soon as possible. :)
I swear Sonata is so much like me its utterly terrifying. Anyway RUN HORSEY RUN!
This is interesting, i like what I've seen so far. I look forward to more.
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Thanks! Glad you enjoy it
Huh, interesting take on the sirens, and it actually makes a certain degree of sense with how they summoned their alt-forms in the movie, but I don't know that I buy that they necessarily used to be average ponies before; if nothing else, there's those wings to take into account. Still, story seems to be off to a good start!
RUN HORSEY RUN!
*ahem*
Anyway, another good chapter here; could use some editing, but it's not bad. I like your expansion on the characters, and in particular, Aria's perception of herself as the protector of the group, and I'm immensely curious about...
...this. I imagine it'll be addressed in later chapters, and I'm looking forward to them!
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Glad you like it! Thanks for the fave 
I plan on explaining everything in later chapters
This story is awesome I love sonata
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Thanks :) I'm glad you like it.
5089829 I like all books I'm like twilight
The biggest issue I see with this story in terms of punctuation is the lack of commas, specifically in regards to direct address. When someone is talking to a particular person and is directly addressing them by name, that name needs to be set off with commas. For example:
should be:
As is, it's talking about someone named "Lord Tirek Adagio." There's a really great guide to dialogue punctuation that explains everything I just said and more on this very site, which can be found right here that I think every person should be required to read before submitting a story. There's some other typos in the story, but that was the one that really stuck out to me.
As for the story's content itself... tough to say, because not too much has really happened yet (I did read the second chapter). Going to need to have a bit more before I can say what's going wrong or right with it.
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll go back and fix that stuff as soon as I can. The story is a little slow as of now, but the speed will pick up soon. Anyways glad you enjoyed it at least a little bit
Keep up the good work. Aria truthfully is the only one of the three I didn't care for in the movie; but considering you made a chapter solely about her a little interesting despite that fact, I am looking forward to seeing what you can do with Adagio and Sonata.
Ooh, interesting.
Keep up the good work!
More plz
Should that be Adagio?
Ooh, interesting. I'm guessing next chapter will be a flashback to Sonata's past?
(Also, I am insanely jealous of how quickly you write)
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Haha can't believe I missed that during my proof read. I fixed that little issue
Oh and thank you
I try to add a chapter a day 
5096346 Glad to be of assistance!
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I'm glad that you like it so far
Thanks
I really love the story <3
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much
That means alot. I'm glad you're enjoying the story
5097090 no need to thank me I'm just saying the truth. ^ω^
keep up the good and fast work . amazing i love it ! :D
Oh god that was so sad D': but I love the story <3
I look forward to the next chapter :)
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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story
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Because I'm the kind of person who likes sad villains, and thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far
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Thank you so much!
5100862 Oh god!! This is just getting better and better! Words can't describe how much I love this story <3 I'm already excited for the next chapter.
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That means alot to me that you like it so much 
Wow youre so kind!
Ooh, nice; they've set themselves up in style, now! And next chapter's going to be a doozy, I can just feel it...
I meant to post this quote on chapter 2, but I forgot. I chose it because it sounds like something Aurora would say in one of my stories. (Aurora has a friend named Aria, and they travel to dangerous worlds together.)
The S in Sonata near the end needs to be capitalised. Other than that, this story's the worst!
(sarcastic)
And Sonata still calls the human world "the worst" huh? This I'd like to see!
Who are ya and what've ya done with Aria?
Self-allusion?
And, to quote the random stallion, "I would absolutely adore it if you could do a follow up act possibly?"
Wow that makes actually sense why Adagio wanted to be adored, but the chapter seems a little bit cut off. Does that means there will be another chapter of Adagio?
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Yes that's only part 1 for her, the next part will be up soon
This is what I get for not reading as the story updates. I got so caught up I didn't know the second part hadn't come out yet!
5117980 ok thanks
can't wait for the next chapter.
Finally got my library sorted out and saw this. Very interesting thus far, and goes a long way toward explaining Adagio's need for adoration. Looking forward to Part 2!
Oh, I see now. Nice!
"Oh my gosh! Run horsey run!"
Sonata is just so adorable! XD
Nice, love sonata
And soon they shall sound like angels
Normally I'm all for Violence isn't always the answer, but I think in this case Violence is the answer.