• Member Since 3rd Aug, 2014
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BewhoUr


I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.

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Aloe and Lotus are devastated. They aren't bringing in enough money to keep the spa open, and when one of their most faithful customers comes over, they must tell her that the spa is to be closed. And she's not taking it. She must have her makeovers, no matter what the cost.

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I write all of my stories/chapters in about 20 minutes, so 45 minutes is a long time for me, good job! :pinkiesmile:

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Wow, thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Nice work for a 45 minute story. You sir have earned my respect

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Why thank you! :rainbowwild: Oh wait, I gained your respect? I should use a more proper face. :moustache: That's better.

Wow!!!! I want to see more of Rarity kicking some ass!! No offense.

Spike walks to the KOed worker. Looking down at the ex-light weight champion at the demolition site, "Dude ,You don't treat a lady like that, Be glad I didn't have to Bar-B-Q you." He waddles off "Looks like we're going to do some more gem hunting":moustache::facehoof:

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:duck: Rarity's a gangsta. And if I have my way, in the sequel she will be a sumo wrestler :pinkiecrazy:


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Rarity's barbeque is always watching :pinkiecrazy:

Takes me about three hours to write stories even small ones lol I'm one of those people who nit pick everything when I write though.

I say I'm RD but am I really a Twilight? :twilightoops:

As for the story I really enjoyed it I could see Rarity pulling this off., because with her it can only go two ways.

She'll scare the problem away or she'll make a scene until it goes away.

Ethier way I agree spike is going gem hunting....for a while lol.

4.5/ 5

She probably spent the last week gathering funds so she could buy the spa. Of course she just bought an empty building.

i liked this story, I want to see a sequel! :twilightsmile:

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