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River Road


Writing Comedy, Adventure and Slice Of Life. Desperately trying to keep up with all the crazy stories my brain comes up with.

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Rarity goes to the spa with her friends.
One by one.
Day by day.
Can there really be something like too much of a good thing?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 38 )

4996572

I still feel like I can't compare to that profile pic of yours. :raritywink::trollestia:

Well, that was rather fun to read.

Thanks for writing! :raritywink:

4996853

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :scootangel:

Approved for Nonpareil Fiction. Well done.

4997174

Yay~
I know it's not an impossible achievement like EQD :derpytongue2: but I still feel proud of it. :twilightsheepish:

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It was a well-written story and lacked the common flaws Slice-of-Life stories tend to contain. As such, it was enjoyable and did as it promised. It just so happens to have been in the incoming folder and eligible for approval.

Be proud. You have done what I cannot.

Not that I can do much, but it's fun to say that. Nonetheless, it's good.

Awesome River my friend, just awesome!:heart:

:rainbowlaugh: I can see why this wasin the popular box!

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It was? Oh horsefeathers, and I missed it. :ajsleepy:

Anyway, glad you liked it. I hope it made you chuckle a couple times. :pinkiehappy:

4997746 It definitely did! :heart:

Hope Rarity isn't paying for all their spa treatments. That stuff gets expensive.

Rarity is so generous that she is single hoofedly keeping the the spa in business.

cool story, though i have somethought on pinkie...PINKIE WOULD NEVER SAY SHE SHOULD BE LESS RANDOM. lol. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiesmile::pinkiesick:

4999670

Well, at least Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Twilight and Fluttershy should all have enough money themselves.

4999934

She certainly does a lot for their business. :trollestia:

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What's more random than being less random. :pinkiesmile:

Heh, the toil of being that one friend that enjoys doing something enough to be considered the 'go to guy'.

5003521

Relaxing is hard work, darling. I can't blame them for wanting professional company, can I? :duck:

Not what I was expecting from the summary but still very good.

5011283

Oh? And what were you expecting from the summary? :ajsmug:

5015120 I thought there was going to be some sort of spa intervention.

5015140

Ahahaha. :rainbowlaugh:

Well, I guess if I ever want a sequel to this, now I know what it would be. :twilightsheepish:

but my grand-aunt Surprise

You just had to, didn't you? :rainbowlaugh:
Good story :twilightsmile:

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Yes, I did. I think it says that somewhere in my contract. :ajsmug:

*Grins* Very cute. Bravo.

:pinkiehappy:
Billiant, just brilliant :)

5374312

Why thank you.

It's nice to have someone commenting specifically on the loop. Lets me know that people actually noticed it. :twilightsheepish:

I don't know why, but Rarity at the spa is a popular theme for me. All in all, a fun read.

I'd love it if this gets some kind of sequel where all of the others find out each other's little secret.

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Ah well, this was really more of a stand-alone piece. I don't think anypony except Dash would really care about the others finding out, anyway.
But if you want to write a sequel, go ahead. :derpytongue2:

Beautiful. As for sequel bait: get Bulk Biceps involved. And Starlight Glimmer. You know, get her introduced to all the friendly traditions around. :pinkiecrazy:

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"Oh dear, I am really sorry."
"It iz fine, Fluttershy." Aloe just stared blankly at the large, pony-shaped hole in the wall.
"But this is all my fault, I-"
"You could not know this vould happen." Lotus agreed, standing next to her sister and staring as well..
"But I did know about this. I should have warned you."
"It is a new practice ve vanted to try out. You could not have expected it." Aloe turned around slowly, looking up at the shelves. "So..."
Lotus nodded, looking at the large number of large glass jars on the shelves, each with tiny holes and a bit of greenery and water inside for their inhabitants. "So..."
"I think ve might vant to vait a little longer before ve offer butterfly massages."

(Of course by now we know that Snowflake is actually masseur at the spa, so it doesn't work quite as well :derpytongue2:)

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Actually, I meant Bulk as a masseur. He's a future Wonderbolt too, remember? Imagine him giving a massage to Rainbow Da-

Wait. Maybe he got the job after he gave some of his fellow recruits a massage at the Academy. Would those two know that about each other?

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Well, he was on their Equestria Games team, so I'd think she probably knows a bunch of things about him.

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Ah, but did she confide in him that she likes massages, for example, or that she's a hoof fetishist very sensitive about ponies touching her hooves? There's a story in there somewhere.

But seriously, back on the original topic: I like the idea that Rarity gets tired of the spa, even if she does enjoy it. Gives a nice little bit of depth.

Rarity isn't Generosity, she is the Element of being a glutton for punishment.

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