I am a young writer and a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fan. I love to read and I hope to write a lot of stories.
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Applejack agreed to go to the spa with Rarity. She never agreed to getting her hooves done while her fashionista friend goes shopping.
She also never agreed to discovering a secret about the Ponyville Spa that she wished she had never discovered.
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This was something a wrote for a contest between a few friends. I didn't win, but I cleaned it up and decided to post it here for chuckles. Feedback is always appreciated!
Thanks to d2xa on Deviantart for the cover image!
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sorry I can't read it at the moment. will put it on Read Later though.
Oh snap??
I'm a bit confused help me out here
Not bad. Wouldn't mind seeing this added to just a bit. I was kinda expecting a Rainbow Factory kinda deal but this was still interesting though a back story would be interesting too. just a thought.
Really? That's the big dark secret? Unless this goes somewhere sinister later on, I don't think the "dark" tag really fits.
Frankly, the stuff in the secret room is less disgusting than some of the ingredients used in real life beauty treatments.
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Could you elaborate on what exactly confused you?
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Yeah. I guess it wasn't all that dark. To tell the truth, I didn't really feel like Slice of Life fit here and I was going for a dark feel...
Well, I guess I'm still working on my writing skills. Thank you for commenting, though.
Seems to fit the comedy tag more than the dark tag.
This'll be one of the rare stories that I favorite and dislike simultaneously. It was a good tale, but it was falsely advertised.
Good story, although the comedy tag would be a good idea along side the dark tag.
Cute little story, although I have to admit I was disappointed with the big dark-tag worthy secret.
So is the face mask stuff made of Pegasus feathers and unicorn horns etc?
OH GODS!!!! That just.....scary....I think. Damn.....I'm confused.....but I don't care.....oh well
This sounds a LOT like
ChristmasRainbow Factory despite the hilarious parts I admit to laugh in. All around, a 7/10, great workHoly Crap!!!
Mud masks is ponies, its ponies I tells ya!!
I like that the dark reveal was messed up but believable. Its just leftovers from customer treatments. It is dark, for sure, but not by much.
Horn bits are skull fragments, and feathers are fingers.
The other stuff is just kinda gross.