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Wheller


Surprise!

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When Vinyl Scratch meets her childhood idol, Lounge Singer Pips Domino, who wanders by himself into Ponyville late one afternoon, she becomes overcome by fangirl zeal. However, her other friends don't quite share her enthusiasm for the singer's visit...

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Happy Vinyl? :twilightoops:
Happy Vinyl! :pinkiehappy:
....Happy...Vinyl...? :rainbowderp:
.....Happy Vinyl :facehoof:

Dear god how will this explode in our faces.

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The "explosion" I anticipate has a distinguishing facial characteristic that leads everypony in town to assume that she's an imbecile.(Hint : :derpyderp1:) Simply put, Octavia will have company in wanting to stomp her into the ground for being an idiot.

oh dear celestia, this might not end well. in other news, glad to see that rainbow and twilight together again :rainbowkiss::heart::twilightblush:

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His smug comment about still having it gives us another clue as to how things will blow up in Vinyl's face; not only will she be horribly disillusioned by her idol, her marefriend will prove herself to not be the cretin everypony in town thinks she is by giving her an extremely articulate pre-dumping dressing-down.

Ah. So that's what Monty's doing in Fetlovostok....trying to find one of the other keys to the Master Archive. That should put Vinyl's oncoming disagreement with Derpy into a certain amount of perspective. (As does my suspicion that I know who one of Luna's eyes and ears in town might be.)

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Pips didn't say it, that was narration.

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Ah. He probably still thinks along those lines, though, eh?

So why's Vinyl still on Twi's couch when Derpy and she are together

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It's part of her punishment.

Well, this isn't going to end well; Fluttershy isn't going to like the Surprise that Legion left her at all.

Also, it seems to me that whatever Derpy is doing is a story in its own right.

Hmm, so suprise has amnesia? or he released her finally?

I wonder if Twilight has any idea of what 5 kg of C4 is capable of when it's triggered by a blasting cap; I know that comparing Dinky to high explosives and Vinyl's idiocy to setting it off is sort of harsh but it does seem fitting.

Also, famous last words time there, Flutterload.

Fluttershy was proud of herself. It was a great plan! What could possibly go wrong?

Then everypony died. Thanks Fluttershy!:facehoof:

Surprise and...Fluttershy? Did not see that one coming, but I desperately want to see more.

uh oh. :applejackunsure: I don't like the sound of that last line.

Great. Between the lounge lizard that's got Vinyl's head all messed up and the nutbar at Fluttershy's, this is turning out to be a right mess.

i really hope this will not go where it most likely will go.

Legion got himself a manipulative charmer as a minion?

or he remember the past and has his own dark story. :unsuresweetie:

You lot are not nice to poor old Pips Domino, what's he done to deserve your ire?

You should all be ashamed of yourselves. :pinkiesad2:

:trollestia:

Whoawhoawhoawhoawhoa!
Wait... what? I.. what is this... I don't even... HOLY CRAP! Thank god you've been updating so frequently. My interest in this story just shot up ten-fold.

you know how to keep us coming back for more of the story

Greeeeat; nopony knows it but Legion set Derpy up the bomb. This is the second time he's tried to blow her to smithereens and this time, it might take.

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We just thought he was a jerk, not one of Legion/Zephyr's goons.

Great, just when one evil crazy pony is "cured" for now, we get a new one,and even more dangerous since hes a fucking manipulator ,yeeeehawww for them

hope Pinkie is ok :pinkiegasp:

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well,when you get someone "where you want him" you usually have a dark motive behind it :pinkiecrazy:

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Do try to remember the difference between Zephyr, Overdrive, and Legion.

Zephyr was a unicorn prince of Equestra, still not full grown. Overdrive was the form he took after being released, and was at full power.

Legion is the amalgation of Whirlwind, Overdrive, Monty Ulan and Surprises consciousness. Trapped inside a Pegasus body.

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You know, one of these days, I'm going to write a story that has nothing bad happening in it. And I'm going to laugh watching you lot freak out about the perceived dangers hiding around the corner.

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Which makes him the most dangerous character you've yet created (he said with the expectation of worse to come) to date.

oh dear sweet celsetia, more problems...*eargarly waits for more*

Sorry couldnt help it!

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The reflection is rather vulgar, isn't she? :pinkiehappy:

Great. Surprise is broken, Pinkie Pie is confused, Zecora's need to pummel Vinyl came into play AND Legion is about to blow up the Divide for reasons known only to him/her/themselves. Let's hope that the sole sane pony out there has the sense to keep Derpy from getting blowed up real nice in the process.

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And...who is pips? Another minion like surprise is/was?
Also, again with killing off pinkie pie? Isn't this the second time now? Damn universe resets.

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"knew no more" doesn't mean death, "knew no more" means passed out.

I'll use different words when someone dies.

i feel justified in saying this.

what the YIFFING BUCK is going on!?

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Pips is trying to protect himself from Legion.

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Good thing that his need to protect himself might have the beneficial side-effect of keeping Vinyl's marefriend:derpytongue2: from getting blown up....again. :facehoof:

then turn left into the field at the corner of "holy shit" and "what the fuck."

All I can say is "VAT A TVEEST!!!" Pips is gonna be pretty pissed when he finds out the Divide is a crock.

love the ending... and holy crap Vinyl is going to get it from Derpy again...

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Vinyl Scratch is a rather naughty pony. :rainbowwild:

I would hate to be vinyl She goes through so much pain

I hope at some point in the future, we address the issue of what Pinkie Pie is going to do for a living now that the Cakes have sacked her; we don't need her turning into salespony for cement again.

And as they head to the Divide and whatever insane crap is there, let's hope that Derpy is more or less intact so that she and Vinyl can have the angry make-up sex hinted at in their 'finale'.

If derpy cant accept that the world needs someone crazy ,reckless ,childish and so on... to save it,then damn.

Guh, I want Derpy to go on one of these adventures some time, just so she knows Vinyl's not just off cheating on her again. Might make their relationship a little stronger.

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