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Buttercup
I enjoy ponies and everything about them including reading and writing fanfics of all kinds.
Buttercup
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Yay, I like it
Nice story!
I assume that (from the incomplete tag) you plan to continue writing this story.
If you don't, that's perfectly fine. This story was well written, and would make a nice one-shot.
Just a suggestion.
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I was considering leaving it as a one shot, but I think a romantic story with Rainbow and Fluttershy going on dates and doing kinky sex stuff with each was more entertaining.
4897377 yeah, yeah, I get it.
That's good too!
I look forward to seeing how this story turns out!
This was fun.
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People like sex, and I didn't even know that it was featured. I just came back and saw all the notifications really.
Not bad, but watch your tenses. You're slipping between present and past quite a bit, and it's jarring to the reader.
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Oh thanks, I'll have to look through it again, its kind of a mix of perspective really.
Le Petit Cheval Lesbienne - The Little Lesbian Horses?
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Yep.
i liked it and Buttercup can you make a sequel for this story
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A sequel? I'm not too sure really as this was only meant to be a quick connection between Rainbow and Fluttershy.
4906502 ok
Very nice chapter! The only criticism I'd give to the writing is that it jumps between present and past tense a few times.
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Thanks, I usually have that issue. Though Im working on it
wonderful story. but if I was you. I would watch your tenses