PhoKingAzn
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oh good lord
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WAKATCHA WAKAHANAHA!
Nooooooooooooooooo
Dude, you mix up past and present tense like a MOTHERBUCKER.
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EXTERMINATE!!!
Are you alright?
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indeed, atm I'm just eating a bagel, working on some bills,
coming back once and in a while to see story reactions
462966 I think I ought a help you with this.
See me before you upload another one of 'these'
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Welp, if you are looking for reactions I may as well read it to give you mine.
Here I go.... Clopfic ain't my thang really, but that art is pretty damn cool.
funny thing is, i literally typed this, in 2 hours, geez i'll proof read in a second
Oh sweet Celestia... What did I just read?!
My brain needs some bucking mind bleach! Also, I meant the cover art for your story, not the bucking art in it...
Congratz, you have scarred this man for the next 72 hours (at least).
Alllllllrighty then...
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*Picks up phone* Yes, hello, Acme Company? I need a 55-gallon drum of brain bleach delivered to me, STAT!!!
From a literary standpoint *can't believe I'm doing this* not bad, though you are using the wrong word in more than one instance, and your grammar could use a bit of tweaking.
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indeed i'm very sorry for grammer, i like to speed through stories to get the plot down first,
making grammar corrections atm
When I thumbs down this, don't think its because I hate clopfiction, because I love it. But this fic really just wasn't written well. You really should take your time when writing fics. But the pics were nice.
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hmm
well atm im writing one shots to improve my grammar a bit, thanks for your insight
It is a Neighponese book, hmm?
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great idea neighponese, when i need it lol
Being a grammar nazi of compulsiveness which would rival Twilight's, I found this nigh- unreadable, too fast-paced, and extremely shallow.
So not exemplary, but not the worst clop-fic I've read.
The grammar and capitalization scarred me more than the story itself. Work on it!
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shallow... like a hentai?
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>>PhoKingAzn
You beat me to it!
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i think imma make one more, like one shot, then im going to work on the other stories, i guess people really are grammar nazis
>> PhoKingAzn Pony grammar nazis I have an idea!
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In all honesty I disregarded grammar, because that was more than I even wanted to read!
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I actually tried extending, the story a lot, really lol.
i tried to make it simple and long as possible
>> PhoKingAzn
I want to introduce you to my friend the adjective. He is very nice and makes reading fun!
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That is very true and sad for me. (Sobs and sips from a flask)
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>> PhoKingAzn
Ah haha that was perfect!
>> PhoKingAzn
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It begins.
>> PhoKingAzn
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I win!
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damn lol
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PhoKingAzn is that you?
damn. for once the comments are better then the story.
i liked this story just so i could come back and read the comments again
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It was pretty good. Not the best but also not nearly the worst, not bad at all!
I saw you post nothing the last time PhoKingAzn!
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Also this is what you are doing to people.
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you have my respect, your the first one on this comment list to have a positive, remark
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I beat you to that one and this is even better!
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463814 Bro, if you ever need an editor/second opinion on your fic i'd be happy to help, by the way. Just to let you know!
Final for too night had a great time and to keep the party going!
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glad to know
Hm... I've read/seen worse.
I love how everyone says this fic sucks, but I don't think it's that bad. I'm mean sure the grammar could use some improvement but that's really the only problem. Then again I'm not a grammar Nazi so that stuff really doesn't bother me.
2 hours huh, I'm gonna go with 'You were thinking over and translating a good amount of the time.'
It's okay, then again I don't have much grounds to say how it was.
Decent in the story department. (Honestly, I read stuff like this for story, not self pleasure.)
This was a fairly original concept, though I thought of such as well when it came to a pony on earth story where the main human was a criminal.
2 out of 5 spikes
interesting art you found there. I didn't actually look at it, I scrolled down until it was out of view and read around it.
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thanks for the insight