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After Big Mac makes a delicious snadwich, applebloom is forcing him to make more and more! She eventually has so many she becomes obese. Twilight comes to help and if she doesn't stop eating, some part of her body may EXPODE!! Can they stop Fatty-bloom in time?
Oh and I found the perfect cover art but it wasnt allowed since is was NSFW, though I don't see how.. It was just Applebloom eating a sandwich, and she was fat...? Oh well. Sooooo this one will have to do.
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interesting concept
4840379 thanks!
For got to capitalize some names.
4840797 yeah, I know... Lots of mistakes in there still! Thanks though!
I'd really suggest editing before publishing a chapter
4843528 yeah I know, just as soon as I get 1000 words I just want to publish it!! I guess I'm too slow and lazy to edit
4851422 what...?
what is it?
4854832 Big Mac isn't a filly.
And I do like the concept of the story, but you really should edit it before you post anything. There are a lot of mistakes.
4864478 no, granny said, he used to eat it when he WAS a filly, not that he IS a filly now! And yeah, there is quite a few, sorry!
4865507
No! Big Mac is a stallion now, so when he was young he WAS a COLT not a filly. 
4865524 oh, hehehe lol, soz , I'm so stupid
Facehoof to my own silly mistake! Wow, how did I not notice that?? Hahaha, thanks for telling me!
4865560 Youre welcome! I'm glad you figured it out cause my next question would've been if you envisioned Big Mac going through a gender-swap.
4865566 hahaha, well, I didn't figure it out, u told me!!! Though it would have been akward is he did have a gender swap...
4865570 Definitely!
And you might want change it to say colt before you confuse any more people. 
Can't wait for more chapters
4938619 aw really!! Thanks!!
that's so nice, thanks!
4938646 yeah espressily I want to see the ponies reaction to fat bloom
4938738
yeah, sometimes I hate writing the before bit an just want to get to the point!
4938831 when do you think the next chapter will come out
4938872 I'm not too sure. But sooner now, since u really want to read it!! Thanks so much!
This makes me think that she got fat as a filly too
AJ Don't forget to capitalize names and nicknames
To be honest, I'm pretty sure Applebloom would have broken ALL the Apple family's rules by now. Demanding sandwiches...
Who gets grounded for demanding food?
Is the ingredients in the sandwich affecting her attitude?
So Sweetie Belle isn't her best friend. This seems highly out of character for Apple Bloom. It better be the sandwiches.
I can kinda see Apple Bloom doing something like this. Kinda.
Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle
Characters have spaces in there name.
Sweetie Belle can not teleport. Even if she advanced in magic, it wouldn't be that much. As a filly Twilight didn't know how to teleport. Twilight knew levitation only and her talent is magic.
Scootaloo can not FLY
She is no where near flying.
WTAF. gizem, u some messed up motherfucker
6138032 FINLAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY HII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh, says the guy writing a story bout fluttershy meeting perfume through a magic hole. sure,sure. im weird
6139859 Is not magic it is just a normal hole
6143379 fluttershy fell in, and heard a mystical noise
ooooohhh ahhhhhh ohhh AHHHHH
6143379 btw follow back everyone plz