This story is a sequel to The Witch Baby; The Sibling story, The Beginning of The Storyteller Part 2
Every Story has a beginning.
Four Strangers On a Train; One a human Storyteller
One a Minotaur Motivational Speaker
One a Pegasus Traveling Author
One a Griffin Dropout
It has been a long time for a lone human making his way on a train across Equestria.
While waiting on a train he encounters a group of odd balls decides to keep each other company. The human tells them all a story to pass the time. They may just help him find a place to call home.
awesome story
That title.
"Mandaren" should be "Mandarin"
part 1 should be capitalized.
4977960 Thanks for the heads up.
4979889
No problem.
4979889 did I hear some one call for a proffreader :D
4980660 you interested? I still have this on gdoc.
Kitsunes. One of my favorite mythological creatures. I even know a few of my own stories about them.
7009466 That's really cool, any really interesting stories?
7014300 there was one where a kitsune tries to play a trick on a traveler, only to endmup losing it's Hoshi no tama (a small orb said to contain its soul and/or powers) And tearfully begs the man to give it back. She promises that if he returns it, she would look over him like a protector god. Later she saves him by leading him past a group of armed robbers.
7015161 That sounds like a good story. Tanks for the cliffs notes version.
Monitors? Those are a type of lizard, if I remember correctly, are you sure you didn't mean Minotaurs? That would make more sense, this needs some proofreading and probably some editing, it sounds broken here and there....