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Freewing Alchemist P


Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.

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This story is a sequel to The Witch Baby; The Sibling story, The Beginning of The Storyteller Part 2


Every Story has a beginning.
Four Strangers On a Train; One a human Storyteller
One a Minotaur Motivational Speaker
One a Pegasus Traveling Author
One a Griffin Dropout
It has been a long time for a lone human making his way on a train across Equestria.
While waiting on a train he encounters a group of odd balls decides to keep each other company. The human tells them all a story to pass the time. They may just help him find a place to call home.

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awesome story:twilightsmile:

That title. :facehoof:

"Mandaren" should be "Mandarin"

part 1 should be capitalized.

4979889
No problem.

4979889 did I hear some one call for a proffreader :D

4980660 you interested? I still have this on gdoc.

Kitsunes. One of my favorite mythological creatures. I even know a few of my own stories about them.

7009466 That's really cool, any really interesting stories?

7014300 there was one where a kitsune tries to play a trick on a traveler, only to endmup losing it's Hoshi no tama (a small orb said to contain its soul and/or powers) And tearfully begs the man to give it back. She promises that if he returns it, she would look over him like a protector god. Later she saves him by leading him past a group of armed robbers.

7015161 That sounds like a good story. Tanks for the cliffs notes version.

Monitors? Those are a type of lizard, if I remember correctly, are you sure you didn't mean Minotaurs? That would make more sense, this needs some proofreading and probably some editing, it sounds broken here and there....

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