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Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.

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This story is a sequel to The Crane, The Fox and The Pheasant; Tale for a Phoenix, The Beginning of The Storyteller, Part 1


Every story has a beginning,
Standing in the throne room with two powerful princess waiting to pass judgment on him a lone human must prove that he is not just some lab animal of trained best. With out an idea to help him it is suggested that he tell a story.
But what story could help him? Maybe a tale about two other siblings?

Part 2 of the Storytellers tale.

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Nice.:pinkiehappy: Russian stories are allways a refreshing change compared to german ones.

Still some missspelled words here and there but that aside.

Like:
"Hungary." Was her cry. but I guess it should say "Hungry." was her cry.

"Good storyteller we sense that you are sacred." is probably meant to say "Good storyteller we sense that you are scared." ?

4312669 Thanks the first one isn't a misspelling it a mix between Monster and babe babel but thanks for the second one.

When did the storyteller say that it was an arrow of love that hit the witch baby? It was just a regular arrow, how could Luna interpret it that way? I mean, did it come out of the Sister Of Sun's heart, or her tears or something like that?

Also, there were only seven tarot cards spoken, when there should have been nine, what were the other two? By the way, it's spelled tarot, not taro....

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