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UPDATE

Wow. .... Just wow everyone. Thank you soooooooo much!

There's one thing I love more then doing what I do and that is knowing that you are all enjoying it with me. As much as I want to show how much I appretiate your support I'm afraid I must move on. I need my sleep :)

I love all you guys for your appretiation and support for my work and I hope to see you guys real soon.



PS: Yes I am working on part 3 as I speak. :)

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Comments ( 55 )

Part 3? Everybody be dead boy, who yo gonna do that........boy?

apart from Twilight, but she be dead on the inside, you know bruh, like some zombie and it's all like "S'AWESOME in da house lik a beg bog,bro lik word man!" If you know what I mean

475842 It's good, but how can you make a sequel with just Twilight? Add a ton of OC's?

Awww yeah part 3! Can't wait for it.

475925 You'll just have to wait and see :ajsmug:

475938 THE ANTICIPATION IS MAKING ME EXPLODE!!!!!! No really I- *BOOM!*

Awesome fic. Shame about Dashie dying, but atleast she saw sense at the end of it :rainbowderp: can't wait for part three.

Neighbor!!! Oooooo......this will be the moment I have been waiting for. Thank you. Thank you so, so much. I admire you. A lot. I admire your work...this is just friggin amazing. And as I said before, someone 'as a problem with Twilight, for whatever reason. And there will be a reckoning! Unless you say otherwise. You are the author, after all.

476571 hehehe......heres a little song:pinkiecrazy:
cupcakes are delicious and colorful
A party without them is pretty dull
Come everpony have a cupcake
For only they will determine your fate
If you wake up in a dark room
You will know instantly its your doom
So gather around and have a cupcake
For only they will determine your fate:pinkiecrazy:

NO!!!! STOP IT, RIGHT NOW!!!!

oooow... celestia's going doooown :pinkiecrazy:

476620
Thanks. I'll never get to sleep, now. Ever since I read that story...well, it didn't scare me, until my head improvised on the story a bit. I ended up with a recurring nightmare about Pinkie Pie either tearing me limb from limb or being impaled in her death pit. Both are scarring.:raritydespair:

this series is creepily awsome!:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

512754
You should meet William. He only ever seems to talk about gears of war.

513221 Where da buq he at? All I talk about is mlp and gears, and everything else at the same time.

Me Too! I only got nightmares when my mind started messing with images. I swear, I must hate me.

515735
And, like I said, this is a piece of art.

Wow. Jus,, wow, oh gid, I cant writ staigt, Im shakking.... and crying...

476722 You don't like Cupcakes? I read the story, watch the youtube videos, I get scared by it, have nightmares, and then I need MOAR. :pinkiecrazy:
Now what you gotta say about that?

Unfortunately, I want/need to read Trixie's Playhouse, Sweet Apple Massacre, and watch SHED.MOV, but I can't summon up the courage and I keep twitcha twitchen! :pinkiecrazy:

Anyways...
I NEED PART THREE!!!!! Part three+Good Writing=MOAR!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

dang, harsh, i friggin love this story, evn though i greive for rainbow dash!:applecry:

1123272 I Don't think that ponies that old can support a family. In my mind they either live off of handouts, granny smith goes to a home and applebloom to an orphanage or adopted by someone in ponyville, they starve to death, or they're brutally murdered for little to no reason which seems most likely in this universe.:derpytongue2:

... still completly sane:pinkiecrazy:

I didnt no u had this story:pinkiegasp:

1945925 I was just wondering that 36 weeks ago! Isn't that such a coincidence?! :trollestia:

so this is part 2 what are the orders? so i know where to start

WAIT! So is cupcakes the real one or rocket to insanity? I'm so confused

This is a great fanfic, but... I don't like that Rainbow Dash is the villain and then gets killed without mercy... And i thought that The Princess would've been more merciful... My idol is... Dead.....

2548602 I still don't like the idea of Flutters dying by animals. It's not the fact that she died, it's just the dying by animals. It would have made more sense to be killed by Timberwolves, seeing as they're magic, and made of wood. Instead she gets mauled to death by live feral wolves. :unsuresweetie:

Poor twilight:trixieshif:twilightangry2:tright:

I read this story before I made my account, and just had to come back and tell you how much I like it; this much : :heart::pinkiecrazy::heart:

(Sobbing) I love this story. But it is just so sad. Utterly sad.
R.I.P.:pinkiehappy::ajsleepy::eeyup::fluttershbad::raritydespair::rainbowwild:.

2380312 feral; as in not tame at all
or no sanity

Celestia: Twilight I'm so sorry...
Twilight: BUT NOW YOU FUCKED UP!
That's how I imagine it going at least.
Story was really sad. :raritycry:

2844407 Sorry
Don't make them anymore
But here *cookie*

Luv da story bro, can't wait for part three!:twilightblush:
I'm usually not into grim darks, but this is awesome!:moustache:

Keep up the good work!:heart:

3126089
Okay... THAT'S when you complain? Gimme a break... :ajbemused:

Amazing story man. Love it, going to read the other

No. NO. YOU. YOU FUCKING RUINED MY DAY. I HATE THIS SO MUCH BUT I CAN'T STOP READING. AND NOW I HAVE TO MOVE ON TO PART THREE AAAAAAGHHH WHY
I THOUGHT IT WAS OVER. I THOUGHT EVERYTHING WAS DONE. BUT NO.
TWI, YOU BETTER FUCKING ELIMINATE THOSE VOICES.
FUCK
Okay I'm done. Sorry. Great story, by the way. I'm just too full of sads to make a decent review.

3303445 I've never read "Jeff the Killer".

NO DASHIE WHYY :raritydespair:

Dashie: DO YOU WANT TO KNOW HOW I GOT THESE SCARS?! :pinkiecrazy:

3126089 Hey....I am the slendermane :pinkiecrazy:

Kill kill kill kill kill

I thought Rainbows tail came off in fall of the apple family :applejackunsure: Or did she still have some left.... just wondering

That was very... Descriptive.

I liked it! Good job! :rainbowwild:

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