Second story to: Backwards: A Not so Element of Kindness
After Fluttershy lost her mind, and tortured Rainbow Dash, making her watch all her friends die accept for Twilight. The purple unicorn helped her escape, took her home, and let her rest. But when Rainbow Dash murders a friend, and slowly begins to feel her mind slip, Twilight is at a loss, unable to decide what to do. She can't help Fluttershy, and if she turns her into the authorities, they would send her to the moon. What will Twilight decide, and what will come of Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy?
I would like to worn you...A few people have disliked the story because they don't know what is going on, please follow the link below if you wouldn't mind.
Backwards series: Element of Kindness
guess im the first post!
well good for a next story of backwards
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it was? oh, sorry ill fix that
glad to hear u like it, i am working on chapter length
yay it came out! i like it, u worked on ur chapter length, much better than last onez. whoa, i love the nightmare one, that won gave ME nightmares! lol
okay, im just checking,
DID ANYONE READ THE THING I POSTED ON THE STORY SYNOPSIS?
"please dont read this unless you have read the previous story."
did anyone? i mean, i recognize some of u from last story, but did anyone else who hasnt read the first story read this one? i mean please ppl
Backward: not so element of kindness pplz, listen to meh wen im typing
but if u have read this, i apolagize for the announcment, IM JUST SICK AND TIRED OF PPL SENDING ME PRIVATE MESSAGES SAYING
"what was going on in your story? it made no sense," or "it started off randomly, whatare you trying to prove?"
really, im not joking
her derp Rest well sleep well Rainbow will not wake again
1168226 lol
wait, did you say my name?
ta da new chapter
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
1192827 lolz, thanks for da support
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Omg I know where u got your profile picture!
1201349 YUP YUP YUP!
RAINBOW DASH PRESENTS IS AWESOME! images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31800000/Rainbow-Dash-Presents-Haunting-Nightmare-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-31898781-500-353.png
ohh yeah! ill think ill read this tomorrow cuz im sleepy now.
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thanks, hope u likez
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you bet ther will be more
sorry, tornado ran through town, havent had power for a few days
ta do, i have been working on this chapter for days, what do ya think?
1260876 thank you, and believe me, there will definatly be more, a lot more
Oh Crap! Dashie is screwed as all heck!
man,thats one epic fight!i dont know but for some reason i like dashie more and more when she's insane!i liked the bad ending from rainbowfactory dashie all insane and scoots dead (thats hoiw scoots became mah fav filly with dinky)i hope this will have a bad ending cuz for some reason i like bad horrifing endings
i should draw some stuff about dis i dont know i might do it if i has time
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1274528 wow, actually, when i write a story, i never think ever how it will end or come out, nor do i think about what happens, so i have no idea whts gonna happen lol, i but im glad u like this story
but i would love it if you drew some art for this fic, that would be friggin awesome! if you get around to it, post it to meh or something so i can see ^.^
whoooo hooo finally! Broken Chains is out! Time for more madness!
eheheh all in good time
hey,its jesse,and i am LOVING the story so far!!!!!!
whoa! you have a Fimfiction accnt?
(did you see the other updates of youtube?)
i added insane dashie in my drawing at my school
sweet! , is there some way you cans how it to meh?
OMFG,i LUV this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait 2 c mor!!!!!!!
thats rough for dashie well i slept too and whats up will all the dislikes this story is awesomesauce! i wish i could give some butter as an icon sooooo ill but fluttershy's instead of butter (gold)
1394458 ha lol, i agree, poor dash. and i also agree about the dislikes, though i am the won who wrote the story, so i would hope that i would have more likes than dislikes..well neways, thanks
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dis story!
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do u play minecraft,because my friend minecraftdude uses that term for gold.
1501260 yes are you part from sky army?
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did anyone read the blog post that said that i put this story on hiatus since i couldnt think of where to go next? im kinda stuck
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I play the xbox version...
do u have an xbox?
1510344 yes i also have the pc version i play the xbox MC when my friends are over i play PC the most i share with my older brother he doesn't play it much so thats good my brother bought pc version for only $10 dollar! i think it was on beta 1.2 or something
It has come! The return of the insanity, or of the sane?
kinda short but glad it came back! most of my favorite stories are on hiatus
1768128denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw7529-das_kinda_sad.jpg thanks, and yeah, I'm aware of that but it was late and that was my brilliant idea to return back with the series. Although I'm sure(even though I say this a lot) there will be greater chance of larger updates, therefore this won't happen again, hopefully
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
LONGER CHAPTERS PLZ. anyways interesting :D
1886441 yes lol, i know i keep saying this, but i have to get past a certain place to get it to work for me. I think it will be the next chapter where it starts, still working on this problem and working on the chapter but, you know how that goes lol
Hey!This is Krazykid2k!
I got a new account because the otherone was hacked or something
....But i got a nnew one and I cant wait to see the next chapter!
I. Like it
Likening it so much
Rainbow....!
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wanna play sometime?P.S.This is krazy kids new account!
fdgvbn sdzvg nbevfb ihad to do that lol