Memories are one thing, goals are another. When you loose something, it makes you want to give up hope, but you should never let your past guide you away from what you can prove. Sometimes memories can push you harder, and sometimes they only make it worse. After Scootaloo looses somepony, she tries out for the Wonderbolts. Does she make it? Does she fail? All she wants to do is make her big sister proud.
pretty good i liked it
wow... I've got tears in my eyes now. it was very well written and engaging. I look forward to your next installments.
1167907 oh thank you! so glad to hear it did make someonez cry but, other installments? i just havent changed it yet to be set as complete, but i think i could add at least three other chapters...i think i will continue it a little ways
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thank you
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oh please do continue it...
1170306 okie dokie lokie!
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thank you... you have no idea how happy you just made me.
1170339 lol, i am pretty satisfied myself, after i finish my chapter on my other story, i will work on a new chapter of this one
dashie will be proud, well, hopefully
luv it!
<3 that was excellent.
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*bows cheesily* thank you, thank you
TADA! new chapter!
I love this. You really do have a way with emotions. Well done.
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awwwww thanks! i think this is the first fanfic ive made with emotions like this, really glad u likez it
whoa....just whoa...that is amazing! you did great with the emotions, i think you did very well on how you had them react n everything
but u did make me cry
I LOVE IT
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tank you
oh god... the comment about the rainbow following the star... <3 you are a beautiful person for putting that in there. that seriously just made my night.
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awwww man, u are so flattering, i rly try to add things just to be cute, im so glad it turned out this way, just hearing that ppl like my story makes my night u r so nice
so are all of the pplz that have been following my story, ALL U GUYS ROCK
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hey I don't lie. I tell what I really and truly feel. you've got a very special talent.
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once again -as the multiple times ive said it- thanks you
WHAT? WHAT DID SHE GET GREETED WITH? I MUST GO ON TO FIND OUT!
Ahem. I'm terribly sorry for my gratuitous use of the common Caps Lock key. But seriously this was awesome. Next part: ahoy!
Okay, so I wasn't expecting Spitfire to be in the same position as Scootaloo... I like the development, though. Well done, again.
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lol, glad to have left a cliffhanger
oh, rly? i was afraid it would be too confusing, glad it turned out okay
Tears in my eyes, this fic makes me so happy!
Awwwww! I love it!
1283102 aww thanks you so much! I'm glad i am good with emotions, sorry that i havent made an update in a while, i am in the school band, we went on a trip, and also we havent had power again, so yeah...im working on it right now!
Scootaloo and Soarin'... something tells me that they're going to become very good friends :) another good chapter btw
1318364 haha lol i needed to add something to make this all whoo-pdee-friggin-doo since i was gone, thought maybe that would add to it..i dunno, but thanks
Wow... You weren't kidding when you said it would be short!
1320493 yeah lol, sorry, i really needed sometihing to take up the space in between two parts...sorry if i bored you, but yeah
Its alright!!! its still an update!!!
1320522 true!
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THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1339635 thanks
dang, i didn't realize how many words were in this chapter, cool!
It's awesome seeing Scootaloo start fitting in so soon. I hope to see more soon.
1380946 yeah, you would think wouldnt you? i have been rly busy being at school, part of the band, guitar, countless other accts, stuff like that stops me from my stories but its okay cause im hapy
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well I'm glad you're happy.
1381894 lol i just found this post, my thing is friggin clogged up with ppls blog posts. after a while those things get annoying
Yum
Dinner with Spitfire... I envy Scoots right now.
Oh snap... What does the note say? I'll just have to wait to find out, I guess.
1492180 lol, i guess you will
Oh thank god its out! I'm so, so sorry, every Saturday for the past three months has been taken up, haven't had a chance to type, also after school is taken up by band competitions, band practice, baton, aiding, and guitar. very busy, oh and also i have had to type a few short stories for online classes, and two you tube videos. but you don't wanna hear about my problems, do you?
This story has a
lot of feels I love it keep up the good work
So much feels
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Thanks you very much
i hath returned with a new chapter, thank god
whoa...
ooh~ wow
1881891 yeah, yeah yeah?
O.O whoa... me gusta.