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Twilight tried to stand up, but whatever she was standing on was causing her to slip. As Twilight mannaged to stand an ungodly stench struck her senses, as she looked at the floor she couldn't belive what she was seeing.
Twilight's legs were quivering, her breaths were just short gasps as she saw the mutilated remains of her yellow friend. Blood still fresh on the corpse, colour drained from her body and her face mauled beyond recognition.
"F- .... Flutershy?" She wimpered. "N-n-no! .... NO!!"
Twilight wanted to reach out and hold her best friend, but the was almost nothing to cradle in her arms. Fluttershy's flesh was almost completly ripped from her limp body. Her bones crushed, her once butiful eyes were gouged out of her skull and her wings were torn off and stripped of their meaty contense. The purple unicorn leaned against a wall and started to bang her head against it, shouting through gritted teeth.
"NO!! NO!! WHY?! WHY?! WHY?!! .... I. .... It's my fault. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I didn't mean for you to get hurt! .... I didn't mean for any of this to happen!!"
Just then Twilight looked up to see Rainbow Dash fly past, she saw a small tunnel to her left and made a break for it. With salty tears burning her eyes she kept running as fast as her hoofs could carry her. As she turned left towards the light she saw yet another one of her friends.
Rarity was on the ground, eyes glazed over and her coat was covered in dry blood. Covered in shards of the diomands which punctured her body, pinning her to the floor. Twilight recoiled in horror, blinking dessperetly to try and fool herself that what she was seeing wasn't real.
"Oh no! ...... NO!! NOT YOU TOO!! PLEASE NO!!"
Twilight broke down in tears, falling to the the ground before bawing into her arms. The loss of two of her friends was too much for her to bear. Twilight held her head in her hooves, screaming into the floor, praying that this was all a disturbing dream. Then the anger began to take over.
"Twiiiiiilllliiiiiight! .... Ohhh Twiiiiiilllliiiiiight!!"
The voice of the blue pegasus was music to Twilight's ears. Rainbow Dash was still breathing. Which means she could finish this once and for all. After all the heartbreak, after everything she had gone through to save her best friend, Twilight couldn't contain her rage anymore. An excrutiating burning exploded in her chest as a blinding light shon from her eyes. She could feel her magic pulsating under her flesh, running through her body as her hate took over every emotion she could feel.
She was starting to loose control.
As rainbow dash being my favorite I hope she kills twilight its cruel but poor Rd what she has gone through on the other fanfics some justice need to be served and as always nice chapter I'm dying waiting for the end keep up the good work
Oh shit!
A very pissed off, magic induced Twilight vs Insane, blood-thirsty Rainbow Dash
LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!!!!!!!!!
468613 Rainbow is my favorite pony too.
My favorite pony is Big Mac. I hope twilight avenges the death if the apple family! Well, Applejack and Big Mac. And that taco.
DEATH TO RAINBOW DASH!!!!!!!
468730 In the condition she was in, I doubt that she'd be able to do the stare.
468787 That IS a good point.
I LOVE IT NEED MORE RAAA-
Well, this was good. Love it and i pray for more!
This is Rainbow Dash
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ooooohhhhhhh.....shit raiboowww dasshhh is going to geeeeet iiiit
468891 lets be friends
No Twilight! Don't kill her, stick to the original plan! You can at least try to save one of your friends!
Yes, save her and then she'll be happy and sad, and she can die in your arms/legs.
RIP
Dash's death should painless. Injecting poison on her is good. BUT THE FOUR PONIES ARE DEAD!!!!
fluttercry:
Yes Twilight... Now go beat her up... SHE KILLED SHY!!!!!!!!
Yes twi feel the hate Join the Dark side!
Ok, so this story is amazing and all, but I have one, and only one problem. It annoys me how Flutters could die like that. Not the whole, torn to pieces thing, but by FERAL WOLVES?? Flutters calmed a Manticore, and a Cerberus, told off a full grown dragon, and judo flipped a grizzly bear. So how in the devil does it make sense for her to be mauled by Feral Wolves? Just saying.
2380312 remember though rainbow beat her almost to death so i dont think she would have had the strength to fight back let alone use the stare
Twilight: "Hey dash.."
Insane Dashie: "Yeeeees?!"
Twilight: "You've pissed me off!"
I can see what would've prevented Dash from going psycho: DILLUTING THE POISON WITH BUCKIN WATER!!!!!!!
x infinity
As I have said before when it was Insane Dashie vs Pissed of Big Mac
Daaaaaaamnnn this just got real
Sovietbine: *appears*
Insane Dashie: Huh?
Sovietbine: *slaps her across the face* YOU ИДИОТ! NOW LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE!? YOU'VE MADE HER MAD! AND HERE I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO BE MY NEW SIDEKICK!
Insane Dashie: What?
Sovietbine: Nevermind товарищ.
This wouldn't have happened if you hadn't voted to split up while a killer was on the loose.