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Misty Dolphin


I joined the fandom sometime between seasons 3 and 4. An online friend actually got me started, and i havent looked back since.

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after my last story was a complete fiasco, I hope this does better.

Comment posted by Noal deleted Jun 24th, 2014

Wanna know something my oc can control time and space.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

The interaction between Shawn and Misty seems a bit... out there. Will you be filling that up in a next chapter because it's not really believable. Otherwise, seems like fun.

Comment posted by Misty Dolphin deleted Jun 25th, 2014
Comment posted by Misty Dolphin deleted Jun 25th, 2014

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what are the odds? :twilightblush: as to how misty came about, rk actually created foresight first. i simply added her as a couinterbalance. every villain needs an enemy, right? I kinda borrowed a cue from dialga and palkia from pokemon, but i think it works. i figure: if foresight controls time, why cant misty control spatial dimensions? :ajsmug:


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it's still a work in progress. i promise itll get better as it goes.

Comment posted by Noal deleted Jun 25th, 2014

4595612 my oc has a sister who has the power to cross dimensions at will,:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Misty Dolphin deleted Jun 25th, 2014

well, dont i have egg on my face? :twilightoops: i swear to you, any similarities were not intentional in any way. heck, ive never even read any stories with similar characters, scout's honor. (and i really WAS a scout, fyi) and I did edit misty and shawn's scen a bit. i hope it's somewhat better. and i did add in something new that rk pointed out about 'apocalypse ponies' as he calls them that he kinda left out until now. anyway, ive already started chapter 2. itll be out when i feel its ready.

Although riddled with errors, I still like it.

I actually rather enjoyed the parts I didn't help make. Although I may not be a grammar master or anything, I try to at least sound literate for you.

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And there is my co-writer now. :pinkiehappy:

3A

4651152 Oh boy, this'll be real fun!

just so everyones aware of which of us is doing what, at the moment, im taking care of the misty and shawn parts, as well as the foresight ones. and rks taking care of the icarus and skyblazer, as well as the hindsight parts. and 3as been nice enough to offer to help with the editing. :pinkiehappy:

3A

Ah, looks much better now.:pinkiehappy: Tell me when you want CH2.

3A

4667896 Happy to help!

Any time you are ready is good.

if anyones wondering how chapter 3 is coming along, i have yet to hear from rk with the next part of his segment so i havent had a chance to start yet. if worse comes to worse and i never hear from him, ill try continuing alone, but if that happens, i cant guarantee itll be as good.

Ok, rks sent me the next part of his, ill begin on mine shortly. i promise ill have part 3 out soon enough. im sorry for the delay. :twilightsheepish:

A pegasus named Icarus doing an endurance race? Dear god, no!

Comment posted by Misty Dolphin deleted Aug 15th, 2014

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well, someone obviously knows their greek mythology.:twilightsmile:

ok, might be a little longer than expected. rk and iare trying a new method of creating the story. i might edit the first 2 chapters a bit, but things should remain mostly the same.

ok, the 3rd chapter is out. ill try to have the next out within the next 2-3 weeks.

i have a new story almost ready, but dont worry, fans. it shouldnt impede my progress with this story in any way.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Misty Dolphin deleted Sep 23rd, 2014

chapter 4 is almost ready, I just need to make a few last adjustments to the skyblazer/icarus part, and put in anything else rk wants to include, and were golden. also, i could use a new editor. 3a hasnt gotten back to me in a while. anyone willing to help out?

and before anyone complains that i havent put in any sex scenes yet, despite it being in the content, rest assured, its in the plan. i think the main problem with my first story was that i was more focused on the sex then the story. plus i barely gave them any time to even get acquainted. just know it is coming, soon.

Listen people. If you are gonna dislike my story, I at least want to hear why. You at least owe me that much I think.

Comment posted by Noal deleted Oct 2nd, 2014

I don't hate your story I love it!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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Glad to hear it :twilightsmile: im just saying that id like to hear why the people that dislike it do. :twilightblush:

And if anyone wonders exactly where in the timeline this story is supposed to take place, I peg it somewhere between the end of season 3 and the start of season 4. My plans are very well thought out, and to me, this kinda makes the most sense.

I will get started on chapter 5 at my first convenience. It won't be too long.:twilightsmile:

Im so sorry for the wait. Ive been busy. Ill get to workon chapter 5 right now. :twilightsheepish:

3A

Well, this looks like you've improved! I like where this is going!

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glad you think so. rk and i have been trying a new method.:raritywink:

I am sorry for the wait, everyone. I hope you like the new chapter.

Look, i can take criticism as well as the next guy, but seriously people! I'm at least TRYING to kake it a good story, not just random clop. If you are going to dislike my story, at LEAST telk me WHY. How else am i gonna improve? I'm having a bad enugh year as it is.

5419937 *hugs* there there

I'm sorry for the delay. Things have been rather busy. Plus my co writer has backed out because of a few scheduling issues. But this story isn't fully dead yet. As long as at least someone has an interest in it, I'll try to keep it going.

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I thank you for the interest. I'll see what I can do, though without my co writer, it may be rather difficult. Plus, I still need to see about rethinking my other story a bit.

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