after my last story was a complete fiasco, I hope this does better.

Wanna know something my oc can control time and space.

The interaction between Shawn and Misty seems a bit... out there. Will you be filling that up in a next chapter because it's not really believable. Otherwise, seems like fun.

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what are the odds? as to how misty came about, rk actually created foresight first. i simply added her as a couinterbalance. every villain needs an enemy, right? I kinda borrowed a cue from dialga and palkia from pokemon, but i think it works. i figure: if foresight controls time, why cant misty control spatial dimensions?

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it's still a work in progress. i promise itll get better as it goes.

4595612 my oc has a sister who has the power to cross dimensions at will,

well, dont i have egg on my face? i swear to you, any similarities were not intentional in any way. heck, ive never even read any stories with similar characters, scout's honor. (and i really WAS a scout, fyi) and I did edit misty and shawn's scen a bit. i hope it's somewhat better. and i did add in something new that rk pointed out about 'apocalypse ponies' as he calls them that he kinda left out until now. anyway, ive already started chapter 2. itll be out when i feel its ready.

Ah, looks much better now. Tell me when you want CH2.

A pegasus named Icarus doing an endurance race? Dear god, no!