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Haha I like what you did there. Very sly.

It's clever, it's funny, it doesn't take itself too seriously. It has plenty of plot. 9/10 enjoyable. A few capitals need to be checked. I say SEQUEL!

I may consider a sequal in the future, work & motervation permiting
Also thankyou for the fav

*Slow clap* Bravo, my dear fellow. I'd recommend doing a sweep for spelling mistakes next time though, Pearl is also spelled Peal and Pear at different points in the story.

Thanks, also Lol woops
Blame auto correct on Word

actually i did forsee a twist in the story i just got that vibe from the title

Susssh, it has plenty of plot

Hah, that was excellent. A good read, with an excellent open ending. Could certainly lead to more should you be motivated to do so. I'd give it a 8/10. Would of been a little higher but it's, "First comes love, second comes marriage..." :rainbowwild:




Welp, I admit I didn't finish reading this the first time I saw the story, therefore not getting far enough for stuff to make sense.



... what tha hell did I just read

Me on the inside, :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
On the outside, what the fuck was that!? :ajbemused:

Twilight getting her royal plot stuffed of course :rainbowwild:

Also Hai Kim~

inspired by a new country we’ve come into contact with a few months back. I think it’s called Whales

Aha, I see what you did there. Being a Welshman myself I approve this :pinkiehappy:
All in all a good story, looking forward to a continuation :twilightsmile:

Hen Wlad Fy Nhadau

Well, I felt our father land was underepersented in fics :raritywink:

unedig ydym yn sefyll

Amen to that, glad someone has the right idea :twilightsmile:


Oh btw, it goes 'First come love, the comes marriage, then' and you can finish it from there

This and Twi and Me got me into the Clopfic genre.

Be proud. And also write a sequel.

I don't know what I was expecting, but I got what was promised... :pinkiesmile:

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