The Lunar Rebellion has thrown Equestria into a bloody Civil War. Families are torn asunder and cities burn, all because of Nightmare Moon. Meanwhile, Celestia is still stunned by the horrific destruction of the Twin Crown Capital, causing her to be withdrawn and reluctant to use the Elements of Harmony.
The Story follows that of Sergeant Star Watch and his squad of loyal Lunar Guardsmen who refused to follow Nightmare Moon in her rebellion against her sister, Princess Celestia. Rejected by those they're fighting with and deemed traitors by their former comrades, the Lunar Guardsmen are pitted in a difficult position. Their honour and trustworthiness now destroyed, he and the other Lunar Guardsmen must rebuild their reputation before they have any chance to help fight against the Lunar Rebellion.
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On Haitus, due to RL issues (see blog post)
Cover art done by Seto: http://seto1337.deviantart.com/
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Thankyou
For being your first attempt at creative writing in several years, this story is very good. And I noticed no grammar or spelling errors, which is always a good thing. Keep up the good work!
And yes, I am zekrom[NLR] from the Everfree Radio chat.
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Thanks~
Though there are a number of gramatical mistakes, but they're very well hidden